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In the End
Contributed by
curtisc
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Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 02:19:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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There's no reason to be afraid,
I'm not here to hurt you.
I can't ignore the bond we've made,
but still I can't believe what we've turned into.
Things shouldn't be like this,
but it is the way they are.
A strong connection still exists,
so i wish for you whenever I see a shooting star.
I hope that one day you will see,
that what we share is great.
But until then friends we'll be,
because in the end you'll be worth the wait.
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curtisc
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2005-11-12 02:19:00]
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Re: In the End
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by Hollow_Eyed_Girl on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 02:53:56 AM AEST
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wow..u totally described what im going through right now..
haha and i thought i was the only one who went through this kind of stuff...
very nice..i love how its worded.. |
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Re: In the End
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by Poetic_Influence on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 02:58:55 PM AEST
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| I like this, nice work |
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Re: In the End
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 07:34:30 PM AEST
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How very pretty. I hope it works out for you in the end...The flow of this was good, it stumbled a bit in that final line of the second stanza...but your expression was sweet, and seemingly heartfelt. Nicely done.
Scorp. |
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Re: In the End
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by O7NeVeS on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 10:47:02 PM AEST
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| hmmm...this was a nice write, but i don't think it's one of ur best, but it's good to see u started writing again. Maybe i'm not crazy bout this poem cuz i'm biased...don't like the idea that ur still "waiting" for her! Tanya |
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