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Array ( [sid] => 109606 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Who Can Save Her? [time] => 2005-11-12 19:49:14 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She is afraid
of aloneness.
Fearful, it will
stalk and taunt her
without remorse.

So, she remains
in fantasy,
pretending
her frog's a prince;
accepting
fragmented love;
and lacking
the self-esteem
to request more.

No one can save
her from such a
captivity
of mind and heart,
when she has not
admitted she's
a prisoner.

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Who Can Save Her?

Contributed by The_Poetress on Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 07:49:14 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

She is afraid
of aloneness.
Fearful, it will
stalk and taunt her
without remorse.

So, she remains
in fantasy,
pretending
her frog's a prince;
accepting
fragmented love;
and lacking
the self-esteem
to request more.

No one can save
her from such a
captivity
of mind and heart,
when she has not
admitted she's
a prisoner.

Copyright © The_Poetress ... [ 2005-11-12 19:49:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Who Can Save Her? (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 08:22:34 PM AEST
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I feel sorry for this girl...no one should think so little of themselves. If you don't love yourself, you can bet your *** no one else will either!
Hopefully she realizes that soon...Nice job expressing yourself...Keep up the writes : )

Scorp.

Re: Who Can Save Her? (User Rating: 1 )
by Poetic_Influence on Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 09:29:12 PM AEST
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that prince will come someday

Re: Who Can Save Her? (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 06:20:45 PM AEST
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Interesting write............but the only one who can save her is herself.She has to believe in herself first !!

Steve

Re: Who Can Save Her? (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 06:37:21 AM AEST
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And that is the worst kind of prisoner. May she someday see the chains for what they are, may her heart be freed.
Take care.
David

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