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Array ( [sid] => 109619 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye to you, Goodbye to all [time] => 2005-11-13 00:05:23 [hometext] => I hate everything that ive went through in the past, it wont go away, nothing will....... [bodytext] => I thought you were gone
Why are you still there
Im losing hope
Everytime I see you
I hate you
I never want to see you
Or hear your voice again
I feel so empty
So lost
I want nothing to do with you
Why does everything remind me of you
And everything I see
Brings back those memories
Of you and me
Its so hard to just let go
Your stuck in my mind
You wont leave
I hate feeling like this
Everything that happened in the past
Is what I am now
Look at me now
What am I
Im nothing
Just the little emo boy that I am
Im not depressed any more
I dont cut
And I dont want to die
But I am hopeless
So goodbye to you
Goodbye to all [comments] => 3 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 52 [informant] => LostInLife [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Goodbye to you, Goodbye to all

Contributed by LostInLife on Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 12:05:23 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

I thought you were gone
Why are you still there
Im losing hope
Everytime I see you
I hate you
I never want to see you
Or hear your voice again
I feel so empty
So lost
I want nothing to do with you
Why does everything remind me of you
And everything I see
Brings back those memories
Of you and me
Its so hard to just let go
Your stuck in my mind
You wont leave
I hate feeling like this
Everything that happened in the past
Is what I am now
Look at me now
What am I
Im nothing
Just the little emo boy that I am
Im not depressed any more
I dont cut
And I dont want to die
But I am hopeless
So goodbye to you
Goodbye to all

Copyright © LostInLife ... [ 2005-11-13 00:05:23]
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Re: Goodbye to you, Goodbye to all (User Rating: 1 )
by spazie on Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 12:36:39 AM AEST
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i feel u on that one. it is the exact same with me

Re: Goodbye to you, Goodbye to all (User Rating: 1 )
by enigma on Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 03:16:41 PM AEST
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...I love what BlueGusto writes...he seems so even keeled...not me...seems I was born to live on the edge...either screaming in fright or screaming with delight...

...I've gotten a whole lot of understanding and pretty much can put my past together...know what poison it was that I was fed...it's creating new wholesome experience...creating healthy 'tapes' to take the place of the old lies...it is a muscle I just haven't used...

...hey, I won't give up if you won't...actually, I'm not going to give up, but it would be nice to know I'm not the only one struggling out here!

...good write...

...thanks...

ron...enigma

Re: Goodbye to you, Goodbye to all (User Rating: 1 )
by sleepykisser on Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 09:32:18 AM AEST
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wow, so honest and emotional.
good job

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