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Array ( [sid] => 109642 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => too deep [time] => 2005-11-13 13:29:11 [hometext] => [bodytext] => as i stuble through the darkness
as i cry
as i want someone to hold
as i wanted to die

there's nothing for me
crimson in the dark
i stayed only to bleed
the break down of my broken heart

my soul tickled
by the thought
my soul cut
by the blade

why?
the question bruning through my veins
spilling out my wrists
bruning throught my pain
coming out my fists

why? i dont know why
i don't like my life
but somehow i dont want to die
it's not like everyone else says
"just to know your alive"
it takes me away from reality
and time brings me back again

i know i'm alive
the pain reminds me
time after time
i have to be alive but i question it
when i wait to bleed
the skin open
my wrists so painfully sore
i still don't know
why i keep coming back for more

i wish
i could feel like i used to
like my first time
i want something to make sense
something other than pain and lies [comments] => 3 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 72 [informant] => SmileSkinDeep [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )
too deep

Contributed by SmileSkinDeep on Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 01:29:11 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry



as i stuble through the darkness
as i cry
as i want someone to hold
as i wanted to die

there's nothing for me
crimson in the dark
i stayed only to bleed
the break down of my broken heart

my soul tickled
by the thought
my soul cut
by the blade

why?
the question bruning through my veins
spilling out my wrists
bruning throught my pain
coming out my fists

why? i dont know why
i don't like my life
but somehow i dont want to die
it's not like everyone else says
"just to know your alive"
it takes me away from reality
and time brings me back again

i know i'm alive
the pain reminds me
time after time
i have to be alive but i question it
when i wait to bleed
the skin open
my wrists so painfully sore
i still don't know
why i keep coming back for more

i wish
i could feel like i used to
like my first time
i want something to make sense
something other than pain and lies




Copyright © SmileSkinDeep ... [ 2005-11-13 13:29:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: too deep (User Rating: 1 )
by SmileSkinDeep on Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 03:24:48 PM AEST
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hehe.....ya know how it says "stuble" well its supposed to say "stumble"


Re: too deep (User Rating: 1 )
by lilblkcat on Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 10:19:46 PM AEST
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your poem is great. its very real and i believe probably describes many cutters true feelings. thank you for putting those feelings into words.


Re: too deep (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 06:16:30 PM AEST
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good poem april, really reflects the pain, and for your own good i hope you stopped. =P

~natalya




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