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Rape
Contributed by
Nardo
on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 08:52:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Amongst the trees
naked and bare
spinning wild a slut bride
laughing in reds and crimson hues
the blood that flows from her inside
the door to her youth
broken and busted
with the hopes of Love lingering
in her hair.
With no one near
no one to hear
she screams the same scream
heard around the wolrd,
the agonizing agony of rape.
Her body twisted into shapes
unknown to animal or man,
this beast that smells so cheap of anger
the creature caught in the swells so low
never high,
only to find it between
a young woman's legs.
Copyright ©
Nardo
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2005-11-13 20:52:28]
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Re: Rape
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 09:00:47 PM AEST
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Hmmm...well....this is graphic...as is the subject matter. You certainly conveyed your thoughts on rape well. Vivid and emotive. Hope you haven't experienced this...
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Re: Rape
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by P0rNStAr on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 02:35:49 AM AEST
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it's not a easy thing to talk about even more so if you have been through it I know and worse so many turn there heads...I hope this is not a write from experience
x take very good care x
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Re: Rape
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by DamentedSuicide on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 03:11:44 PM AEST
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*chills* wonderfull poem yet so horrifying... your a wonderful writer and i hope this isnt written because it happened
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Re: Rape
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by Itsme7 on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 04:06:02 PM AEST
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This poem uses emotions well to describe and makes it easy to picture.
very desturbing and extreamly grafic.
well done
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