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Song of your life..
Contributed by
Hollow_eyed_girl
on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 09:42:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The world you explore
They treat you like a whore
All you do is cry
The world makes you want to die
You want acceptance
But all you get is silence
Once again you sit alone and cry
Then a bit more you will lie
But everyone sees right through your mask
And no one even has to ask
They know who you are
And they see every scar
But still they dont care
Life is so unfair
Everything you do is wrong
You sing your lifes song
You decide its the end
You can no longer pretend
To the world you said good-bye
And then.
You die
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2005-11-13 21:42:43]
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Re: Song of your life..
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by Itsme7 on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 12:07:49 AM AEST
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| I see this feeling coming through our poetry a lot these days. It seems to reflect the hopeleness felt by many people today. It does get better. |
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Re: Song of your life..
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by XxXMcCathyXxX on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 08:49:55 AM AEST
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Wow very good! i love how you can feel the feeling coming out of it. Plus very good rhyming, i sometimes feel like that.
Keep writing ^__^!! |
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