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Array ( [sid] => 109710 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To Bad [time] => 2005-11-14 15:05:14 [hometext] => children having children or having abortions i guess this is apart of life mayb just a part no one wants to see [bodytext] => A midnight Kiss
Candlelight diners
Gazing at the stars
Lovers hand in hand

Sad she's not his only one
a promise to both
Her ring matching the others
To bad she doesn't know

She gave him her heart
He told her his lies
She said I love you
He asked for proof

She was his for the taking
He wasnt gentle
He wasnt careful
A loss of innocence

A broken promise
A shattered heart
Tears in the moonlight
Suddenly he was gone

A ghost in the wind
A child having an abortion
All in the name of love
To bad he'll never know [comments] => 3 [counter] => 350 [topic] => 21 [informant] => DamentedSuicide [notes] => Edited for spelling as requested. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

To Bad

Contributed by DamentedSuicide on Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 03:05:14 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

A midnight Kiss
Candlelight diners
Gazing at the stars
Lovers hand in hand

Sad she's not his only one
a promise to both
Her ring matching the others
To bad she doesn't know

She gave him her heart
He told her his lies
She said I love you
He asked for proof

She was his for the taking
He wasnt gentle
He wasnt careful
A loss of innocence

A broken promise
A shattered heart
Tears in the moonlight
Suddenly he was gone

A ghost in the wind
A child having an abortion
All in the name of love
To bad he'll never know

Copyright © DamentedSuicide ... [ 2005-11-14 15:05:14]
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Re: To Bad (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinfullilmissmuppet on Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 05:35:17 PM AEST
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Hey,
really sad write
I;ve had an abortion
Emotions goin crazy over this one
hope your ok
till next time,
emz

Re: To Bad (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 10:46:58 AM AEST
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This was really sad.. It is a shame that people have to do that.. Very sad..

Take care
christina

Re: To Bad (User Rating: 1 )
by BrokenXbyManyX on Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 06:45:08 PM AEST
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I liked this.
Young, and vulnerable seems to be what some guys like sadly enough.
Anyways I like this one a lot...nice job.

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