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Hate You With A Passion
Contributed by
longingfor
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Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 06:14:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Youre sprung
Your mind is racing your feet are pacing
Going back and forth like a boomerang
. . . Thinking
You have to choose, which way to go
Which way is better, how would you know?
You already took a risk, it didnt work out
Do you want to go back and turn things around?
Or do you want to continue and see
What this **** will turn out to be if you keep living
But theres no more time to loose, never was
You knew, but you went blind and now with a bruise
You knew it had to happen now or then
It happened already now Barbie hates Ken
He took over he stepped in
Now you have new dreams, a fairytale no reality within
No heartbreaking, no love story
But no happy ending theres no glory
You still wait because you still have hope
But in the ending you find you were a dope
For standing in the rain waiting for someone you cant trust
You found your mistake, but wont make a fuss
And you expected too much, you were so sure
It was going smoothly until no more it was a blur
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Re: Hate You With A Passion
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 07:36:38 PM AEST
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your frustration ran throughout.Well powerful write.
A bit of advice about the boys ....
even when they grow into men they are still checking out other woman walking past thats just the way it is * smiles*
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Re: Hate You With A Passion
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by Suit_Of_Armor on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 06:21:06 PM AEST
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That was awsome. I'm really not good at commenting, but I had to express that it was awsome.
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