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Array ( [sid] => 109963 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ME [time] => 2005-11-18 00:39:05 [hometext] => Just something I thought of.. ^_^ [bodytext] => Sometimes I can get bossy.but it 's just me.

Sometimes I am bouncy but It's just me.

Sometimes I am busy ,,, but it's just me.

Sometimes I carry alot of weight on my shoulder's but it's just me.

Sometimes I go and buy my favorite CD but it's just me.

Sometimes I hate cloudy days but it's just me.

Sometimes I am clumsy but it's just me.

Sometimes I drink to much coffee but it's just me.

Sometimes I am crabby but it's just me.

Sometimes I get drowsy but it's just me.

Sometimes I feel like a big dummy but it's just me.

Sometimes I feel so empty inside but it's just me.

Sometimes I am easy going but it's just me.

Sometimes I am friendly but it's just me.

Sometimes I go and pick flowers but it's just me.

Sometimes I am happy but it's just me.

Sometimes I hardly ever go places but it's just me.

Sometimes I am healthy but it's just me.

Sometimes I lift stuff that is too heavy ,but it's just me.

Sometimes I get into a hurry,,, but it's just me. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 21 [informant] => butterflygirl40 [notes] => Edited for spelling as requested... - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
ME

Contributed by butterflygirl40 on Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 12:39:05 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Sometimes I can get bossy.but it 's just me.

Sometimes I am bouncy but It's just me.

Sometimes I am busy ,,, but it's just me.

Sometimes I carry alot of weight on my shoulder's but it's just me.

Sometimes I go and buy my favorite CD but it's just me.

Sometimes I hate cloudy days but it's just me.

Sometimes I am clumsy but it's just me.

Sometimes I drink to much coffee but it's just me.

Sometimes I am crabby but it's just me.

Sometimes I get drowsy but it's just me.

Sometimes I feel like a big dummy but it's just me.

Sometimes I feel so empty inside but it's just me.

Sometimes I am easy going but it's just me.

Sometimes I am friendly but it's just me.

Sometimes I go and pick flowers but it's just me.

Sometimes I am happy but it's just me.

Sometimes I hardly ever go places but it's just me.

Sometimes I am healthy but it's just me.

Sometimes I lift stuff that is too heavy ,but it's just me.

Sometimes I get into a hurry,,, but it's just me.




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Re: ME (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 01:57:45 AM AEST
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please if you are going to read my poems.

then please comment me okay, cause when i

read someone's poems i always comment them^_^thanks:)


Re: ME (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 08:04:11 AM AEST
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I think you're a tad too repetitive. Alot of people don't like that in writing. I like the idea behind ur poem I really do. You've got it within u to write such great poetry.I'm not criticising u honestly I'm just trying to help.
Goodluck and keep at it.
*hugs*
~sue~


Re: ME (User Rating: 1 )
by Dri on Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 12:55:43 PM AEST
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okay, here's what i think.

it's okay to have a few repetitive lines but when that's all your poem is, it can be frustrating. boring. this has a ton of potential, but i feel like you could change the format just a bit.




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