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Array ( [sid] => 109994 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Sacred Sound [time] => 2005-11-18 18:55:56 [hometext] => To let the sound comsume you takes ambition and passion, to tell a story one needs the words and the knowledge, but to tell everyone what's on your mind takes but a simple word and a moody atmosphere so... [bodytext] => Take your place as I take the lead,
Create the sound so I may embrace the beat,
Pluck the hairs and hit the skin,
As I raise my hand for the voice within,
If you can provide the mood I can lend you my words,
My curse, through my eyes this is inferred,
Feeling consumed as I caress my passon and whisper a sigh,
Stretching my face as the vibe intensifies,
With an anguished voice and a searing heart,
Fused to the cord which numbs this art,
Eyes blurred with old visions that narate the stream,
Forming new words of emotions to scream,
With this deafening noise, adrenaline rushes to sustain my shreik,
And as the pain subsides and emerges as but a tear in my eye,
The echo remains silent...but is still alive. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 25 [informant] => Minus_Blindfold [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

My Sacred Sound

Contributed by Minus_Blindfold on Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 06:55:56 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Take your place as I take the lead,
Create the sound so I may embrace the beat,
Pluck the hairs and hit the skin,
As I raise my hand for the voice within,
If you can provide the mood I can lend you my words,
My curse, through my eyes this is inferred,
Feeling consumed as I caress my passon and whisper a sigh,
Stretching my face as the vibe intensifies,
With an anguished voice and a searing heart,
Fused to the cord which numbs this art,
Eyes blurred with old visions that narate the stream,
Forming new words of emotions to scream,
With this deafening noise, adrenaline rushes to sustain my shreik,
And as the pain subsides and emerges as but a tear in my eye,
The echo remains silent...but is still alive.

Copyright © Minus_Blindfold ... [ 2005-11-18 18:55:56]
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Re: My Sacred Sound (User Rating: 1 )
by Unbreakable on Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 08:09:35 PM AEST
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This is a good write..I like your message. The rhyme scheme could use a little work, but it's pretty good. I like the title, fits the poem nicely. Well done...keep it up

Krystal

Re: My Sacred Sound (User Rating: 1 )
by Desolated_Denial on Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 12:47:58 PM AEST
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Kudos Dustin. :)
I like the last line about the [echo still being alive].
Muchos Muchos Good my friend. :D

+Fight cheap moderators+

Re: My Sacred Sound (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 10:48:57 PM AEST
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This is an excellent and very well written piece of poetry. Very well expressed.

And as the pain subsides and emerges as but a tear in my eye,
The echo remains silent...but is still alive.

Remarkable. I absolutely enjoyed your write. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.
*hugs*
~sue~

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