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flows through your veins and strikes like a dart.
Comes forth from your surrounding aura,
bringing to mind beautiful flora.

It changes every feature of you;
making you special, making you true.
I hear your voice as singing crystal,
so much in love, and oh so wistful.

Your porcelain skin, so smooth to touch,
leaves me feel drunk and wanting you much.
Your glossy red lips, they make me crazy,
confuse my mind and make it hazy.

Your heart and your mind, they are so pure;
and play such a part in your allure.
Thinking of you each day is as right
as looking to find you here every night.

My love for you will never grow old,
never be callous and never be cold.
Of all the things I know that are true,
the biggest of them is my love for you.

darkhorse71
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The Current Of Love

Contributed by darkhorse71 on Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 07:52:59 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The current of love beats with your heart,
flows through your veins and strikes like a dart.
Comes forth from your surrounding aura,
bringing to mind beautiful flora.

It changes every feature of you;
making you special, making you true.
I hear your voice as singing crystal,
so much in love, and oh so wistful.

Your porcelain skin, so smooth to touch,
leaves me feel drunk and wanting you much.
Your glossy red lips, they make me crazy,
confuse my mind and make it hazy.

Your heart and your mind, they are so pure;
and play such a part in your allure.
Thinking of you each day is as right
as looking to find you here every night.

My love for you will never grow old,
never be callous and never be cold.
Of all the things I know that are true,
the biggest of them is my love for you.

darkhorse71

Copyright © darkhorse71 ... [ 2005-11-19 19:52:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Current Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 08:08:06 PM AEST
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oh very nice. im not normally a fan of rhyming but you did an excellent job. you've raised the bar on this one. keep it up.
-trini

Re: The Current Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 08:14:55 PM AEST
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Very sweet John, it's just overflowing with love and heartfelt words. A very pure and truthful right. I haven't read a poem of yours I haven't loved, amazing job.

-Cassy

Re: The Current Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 10:42:18 PM AEST
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Beautiful and loving John. A wonderful, heartfelt ode
to someone very lucky. The last two lines a perfect !!

~Breezy
p.s. LOVE the title!

Re: The Current Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 02:27:58 AM AEST
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Long time no see John: )

This was an enjoyable, loving-type read, with a very sweet, and sigh worthy end...Sounds like love with a fellow ypdc'er...Hmmm...All the best to you two. Very nice job with this write!

Scorp.

Re: The Current Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 05:03:52 PM AEST
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The beauty of the write, is pure.
The title, puts all in perspective.! A wonderful declartion, of "love". Glad to see you back, and well.....And posting beautful, writes as always.!

Brew~

Re: The Current Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 11:03:23 PM AEST
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Hey John, it's great to see you posting again my friend. Well it was definately worth the wait.
A beautiful and wonderfully composed piece of poetry that touches the heart. Your words grace the inner walls of one heart. One lucky Miss she is. Great to have u back.
*hugs*
~sue~

Re: The Current Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 03:02:33 AM AEST
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John this is simply beautifull.
I think someone has blocked my current of luv at least the male/female.
big smiles, lotssa hugs,
emy

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