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Array ( [sid] => 110087 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => DEATH [time] => 2005-11-20 19:53:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Death is hard to understand.
When someone you love very dear passes on to another place in time.
It tears you up all inside.
We are told that the lord has something special planned for them and at least they are in no more pain.
That they are now in a better place.
Well that's all true but what about the hurt of everyone who loses someone?
How do we keep on managing to go on and on.
(we Do) I do not even think the pain goes way ever.
As a matter of fact i know it doesnot.
As each love one passes away it really hurts deep down inside.All i can say is i love you all.
I know we all most someday leave this world that we know as home but what about the hurt what about the pain? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 21 [informant] => car21221 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

DEATH

Contributed by car21221 on Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 07:53:01 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Death is hard to understand.
When someone you love very dear passes on to another place in time.
It tears you up all inside.
We are told that the lord has something special planned for them and at least they are in no more pain.
That they are now in a better place.
Well that's all true but what about the hurt of everyone who loses someone?
How do we keep on managing to go on and on.
(we Do) I do not even think the pain goes way ever.
As a matter of fact i know it doesnot.
As each love one passes away it really hurts deep down inside.All i can say is i love you all.
I know we all most someday leave this world that we know as home but what about the hurt what about the pain?

Copyright © car21221 ... [ 2005-11-20 19:53:01]
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Re: DEATH (User Rating: 1 )
by mjh0813 on Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 09:40:09 AM AEST
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what youve said is something i have been trying to figure out for about a month now. i lost my aunt october 12. i no she isnt hurting any more but her family is. thanks for writing this couldnt have put it better myself.
peace and love
meghann

Re: DEATH (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 09:52:11 AM AEST
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a very real poem
i like it a lot

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