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Array ( [sid] => 110090 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => love empty [time] => 2005-11-20 20:15:15 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Day to Day you show up empty
Nothing to feel me up of joy or happiness
Yet I’m standing here between the door and you
And I still cannot make that move
Show me passion
Show me emotion
Maybe I’ll step closer to you
But it seems hard just because to me your not there
You left me the moment your love died
I see myself a step closer to the door
Nothing to feel me of enclosure
No matter what I say
No matter what I do
You are always going to be empty hearted
Empty of a soul with out emotion
Someone who has given up to love
I close my eyes wishing that when they open all of this will go away
But right now that’s to far from reality
I just met you and maybe I will open my eyes and
I will see through you better
I would see a more sharishful and regardless of circumstances
Unconditional love is always there and never dies
But before that let me introduce myself
And show you meaning
Show you a life called love
Maybe just maybe
Love will feel you up and show me your not empty


[comments] => 2 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 2 [informant] => patti [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
love empty

Contributed by patti on Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 08:15:15 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Day to Day you show up empty
Nothing to feel me up of joy or happiness
Yet I’m standing here between the door and you
And I still cannot make that move
Show me passion
Show me emotion
Maybe I’ll step closer to you
But it seems hard just because to me your not there
You left me the moment your love died
I see myself a step closer to the door
Nothing to feel me of enclosure
No matter what I say
No matter what I do
You are always going to be empty hearted
Empty of a soul with out emotion
Someone who has given up to love
I close my eyes wishing that when they open all of this will go away
But right now that’s to far from reality
I just met you and maybe I will open my eyes and
I will see through you better
I would see a more sharishful and regardless of circumstances
Unconditional love is always there and never dies
But before that let me introduce myself
And show you meaning
Show you a life called love
Maybe just maybe
Love will feel you up and show me your not empty






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Re: love empty (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 09:56:24 PM AEST
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I like this. i can really relate to this, i have a friend that doesn't believe in love. i could never put it into words. but i think you captured the feeling pretty well. keep up the good work. i look forward to seeing more.
-trini


Re: love empty (User Rating: 1 )
by mommyluvsu4alwyz on Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 06:52:19 PM AEST
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I really don't understand why no one has taken time to read you're poem I really liked it a lot and makes a lot of sense and I'm sorry if that is the situation you're in if so don't give up in time he'll open up and you can be that one to show him what love has to offer!




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