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When you and I would part,
You've captured my heart for over three years,
Now the cinders all burnt out.

So many times you've cheated,
Found the others far better than me,
And when you are feeling low and all alone,
You think Ohh chrissy will do.

I've had all i can take,
I told you ages ago,
I have a lot of patience,
That i can be pushed for years and years.

But Sautrday night,
You pulled your last punch,
As once again you told your lies,
After i drove an hour out of my way,
To straighten things out with you,
And set the record straight.

I went to the shops,
Bought the items to cook you a nice meal,
Bought you some beer,
But you never appeared.

All I got was abused,
You put someone else on the phone,
When i called and she said to leave my hubby alone,
More lies yet again,
Playing with my heart,
Has become quite an art.

Then you both accuse me of stalking,
How rude,
You were the one that invited me to your house,
You were the one that contacted me
After all these months.
You have a real gall,
To make that type of call.

Then you wonder why,
We aren't living together in your city,
Look at the facts,
How would you feel if i did that,

I believe in kharma,
You'll get yours ten fold in fact,
Then after telling me no more contact,
You have the audacity to sms me,
If you don't care why bother to call.

Just leave me alone,
I know i have a heart of gold,
I know I'll find a love to call my own,
You're the one with all the faults.

You lie, you cheat, you hurt,
You really need to take a look at your mental state,
Before someone else decides your fate.



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Hurts and Cheats And Liars

Contributed by chrissylee on Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 04:29:12 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I never thought the day would come,
When you and I would part,
You've captured my heart for over three years,
Now the cinders all burnt out.

So many times you've cheated,
Found the others far better than me,
And when you are feeling low and all alone,
You think Ohh chrissy will do.

I've had all i can take,
I told you ages ago,
I have a lot of patience,
That i can be pushed for years and years.

But Sautrday night,
You pulled your last punch,
As once again you told your lies,
After i drove an hour out of my way,
To straighten things out with you,
And set the record straight.

I went to the shops,
Bought the items to cook you a nice meal,
Bought you some beer,
But you never appeared.

All I got was abused,
You put someone else on the phone,
When i called and she said to leave my hubby alone,
More lies yet again,
Playing with my heart,
Has become quite an art.

Then you both accuse me of stalking,
How rude,
You were the one that invited me to your house,
You were the one that contacted me
After all these months.
You have a real gall,
To make that type of call.

Then you wonder why,
We aren't living together in your city,
Look at the facts,
How would you feel if i did that,

I believe in kharma,
You'll get yours ten fold in fact,
Then after telling me no more contact,
You have the audacity to sms me,
If you don't care why bother to call.

Just leave me alone,
I know i have a heart of gold,
I know I'll find a love to call my own,
You're the one with all the faults.

You lie, you cheat, you hurt,
You really need to take a look at your mental state,
Before someone else decides your fate.







Copyright © chrissylee ... [ 2005-11-21 04:29:12]
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Re: Hurts and Cheats And Liars (User Rating: 1 )
by ruby_dreamer on Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 04:39:06 AM AEST
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I like the free-lance style you approached. I also like how the story unfolds easily. I'm sorry you've experienced something terrible. =C I hope everything goes well.


Re: Hurts and Cheats And Liars (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 08:07:32 AM AEST
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nice poem!!I am sorry you went threw this..

Great write ... Keep It up...


Hugssssssssss Autumn


Re: Hurts and Cheats And Liars (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 12:12:46 AM AEST
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Chrissy this is a deep, sad and heart breaking write. I'm so sorry u have experienced this. Leave him in the past and move on. Chin up Chrissy and may u find someone who is worthy of ur love someday real soon.
*heartfelt hugs for u*
~sue~


Re: Hurts and Cheats And Liars (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 12:52:18 PM AEST
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Very emotive spill from the heart here...So very honest. I like the blunt edge to the ending too! I hope you have better luck in love next time.



Scorp.


Re: Hurts and Cheats And Liars (User Rating: 1 )
by colinbaker62 on Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 04:54:30 PM AEST
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A very emotive piece obviously, and as I know nothng of the specific circumstances, I cannot possibly offer advice or my informed opinion.

That said, I think poetry per se, is a wonderful medium for conveying one's inner emotions to others (the reading public) and this work does just that. Good luck to you !.


Re: Hurts and Cheats And Liars (User Rating: 1 )
by Sophie_Taylor on Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 06:13:08 PM AEST
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Great Poem!!
Soph xoxo




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