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[title] => this is the season for holiday wishes
[time] => 2005-11-23 21:05:29
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[bodytext] => feeling lost and affraid i sense the call to my grave
i feel the tap of deaths grip feeling my world do a slip
tasting dirt from falling hard never new to watch my guard
dead flowers and rusty love waiting for a sign above
tinsel folly and mistletoe kisses this is the season for holiday wishes
snow flakes fall snow men grow all in a winter nights glow
but homeless die and suicide rises all in the name of christmas surprises
people get drunk to forget all there cares end up in silly affairs
children they scream as the parents they dream of the burden leaving home
accepting love by the size of the gift never getting the love that they wish
office parties and blooming affection shows as the season starts to show
this is a strange poem with out meaning i hope you understand what i am seeing
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this is the season for holiday wishes
Contributed by
lostrelic
on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 09:05:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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feeling lost and affraid i sense the call to my grave
i feel the tap of deaths grip feeling my world do a slip
tasting dirt from falling hard never new to watch my guard
dead flowers and rusty love waiting for a sign above
tinsel folly and mistletoe kisses this is the season for holiday wishes
snow flakes fall snow men grow all in a winter nights glow
but homeless die and suicide rises all in the name of christmas surprises
people get drunk to forget all there cares end up in silly affairs
children they scream as the parents they dream of the burden leaving home
accepting love by the size of the gift never getting the love that they wish
office parties and blooming affection shows as the season starts to show
this is a strange poem with out meaning i hope you understand what i am seeing
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Re: this is the season for holiday wishes
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 09:12:42 PM AEST
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| awwwwwww so sad ,, yeah I get the meaning of this poem,,, very good write on this poem.. and just to think all of this is going on in the crazy world we live in now... |
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Re: this is the season for holiday wishes
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 09:30:59 PM AEST
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excellent wording, it may have "no meaning" but its was fun to read and i enjoyed it! A+++
"tinsel folly and mistletoe kisses this is the season for holiday wishes" cool line! |
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Re: this is the season for holiday wishes
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by Kie-Kie on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 09:50:17 PM AEST
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*huggles* I thought there was meaning behind it...
Lovely poem :) A+ I just wish it were a bit happier is all :)
Love ya,
~Kiela~ |
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Re: this is the season for holiday wishes
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by BEBE on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 10:03:35 PM AEST
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Very nice write.
I get the meaning! The way i portray it is that the holidays are suppose to be filled with love and "surprises" but all around the world there are people who dont have the chance to feel loved by someone. and that there is still suffering. Am i correct? all in all, Great write... press the 5 on the scale!!
GOdbless you
BEBE |
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Re: this is the season for holiday wishes
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by brew on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 10:04:23 PM AEST
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In other words.........Christmas, is hyped up.......I can relate to this one Regan, and I agree..........Totally.! Christmas, isnt for that........But, blah blah blah.
Brew~! |
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Re: this is the season for holiday wishes
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 11:31:52 PM AEST
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Yes, perhaps the ones who celebrate are believers.
accepting love by the size of the gift never getting the love that they wish
I have taught my sons and my grandkids, the true meaning of Christmas, and to open up their hearts to find the biggest gift of all.
Thank you for sending out this message, meaningless to those who do not accept truths, those hearts that can hear and see are blessed. I pray for those in need at Christmas time and all times forever and ever, amen..
Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: this is the season for holiday wishes
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 02:30:06 AM AEST
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this is so easy 2 understand especially when u can relate 2 it, not 2 worry this is your garden variety what use to be called protest song of the 60t's great write not hard 2 understand at all, of course it makes scence, were no further 2 day than we were in the3rd century, keep 'em coming . . .
Ben |
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Re: this is the season for holiday wishes
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by judasman on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 07:27:50 PM AEST
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| this is a good write, took a few reads for me to understand but finally got there. people seem to take so much for granted these days that they seem to have forgotten all about kindness and decency which is what christmas is supposed to be all about. i've posted a poem about this before on ypdc it's titled decline. anyway good write again |
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