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Japanese Sunrise
Contributed by
adsalamon
on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 12:10:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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Up a hill
Under Japanese sunrise
Shouts and screams of
Combat teams
Slug it up over dented mud
Over dented bodies
Duck & cover, Duck & cover!
Thoughts of home and of lover
Invade your mind DAMN
Must focus!
As bullets whiz past ears
A ringing
Grenade, shouts a sergeant
In a tone that is urgent
Man up ahead
Lost his head, as shrapnel blooms
Like a spring flower
But with military power
Aim & Shoot, Aim & Fire
Blood mixed with what you perspire
Up a hill under Japanese sunrise
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adsalamon
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2005-12-01 12:10:04]
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Re: Japanese Sunrise
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 11:17:16 AM AEST
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'dented mud'?
I like 'shrapnel blooms' though. |
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