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My heart is now black and blue
For you I feel love, but now hate
When you’re ready, it’s too late

I can’t take any more of you
I now hate everything you do
Can’t stand the pain you bring
Now my heart really stings

I can’t take any more of you
You destroy my heart; I want to sue
You can’t make up your mind
I want to charge you a fine

I can’t take any more of you
My heart is black and blue
I love you, but I hate you
I just don’t know what to do

I can’t take any more of you
But I want us to be us two
I hate you, but I love you
Believe me, it is very true

I can’t take any more of you
My heart is now black and blue
For you I feel love but now hate
When you’re ready, it’s too late

**Tiffany, if you are reading this, know that I'm here for you, and I'll always help you beat up him even though he's my best friend (lol), I'm always here for you!!! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 48 [informant] => sprinter27 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Can't Take Any More of You

Contributed by sprinter27 on Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 04:50:23 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I can’t take any more of you
My heart is now black and blue
For you I feel love, but now hate
When you’re ready, it’s too late

I can’t take any more of you
I now hate everything you do
Can’t stand the pain you bring
Now my heart really stings

I can’t take any more of you
You destroy my heart; I want to sue
You can’t make up your mind
I want to charge you a fine

I can’t take any more of you
My heart is black and blue
I love you, but I hate you
I just don’t know what to do

I can’t take any more of you
But I want us to be us two
I hate you, but I love you
Believe me, it is very true

I can’t take any more of you
My heart is now black and blue
For you I feel love but now hate
When you’re ready, it’s too late

**Tiffany, if you are reading this, know that I'm here for you, and I'll always help you beat up him even though he's my best friend (lol), I'm always here for you!!!

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Re: Can't Take Any More of You (User Rating: 1 )
by shutterfly2004 on Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 10:09:45 PM AEST
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This was a great poem! keep up the good work.... You are a friend I could count on:)...... I like friends that are kind, caring and always there for me through the good and the bad and through thick and thin

Re: Can't Take Any More of You (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 12:29:10 AM AEST
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That was really nice of you to write this poem for your friend, Sprints!
I think we can all relate to the love/hate thing, and the pain that comes with it...Nicely said.

Scorp.
(Who wouldn't mind handing out a few fines!! Grrrrrrr!)

Re: Can't Take Any More of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Misunderstood_gurl on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 05:33:50 PM AEST
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i really liked this poem. *High Five* it was really good. Ya kno, it is kinda funny that you can love someone so much...but hate them at the same time. it's a weird feeling. and it was nice of you to write a poem for your friend. i hope she likes it!

-Jessica

Re: Can't Take Any More of You (User Rating: 1 )
by LostAmbition on Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 02:22:58 PM AEST
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lol! cant help but laugh
at scorps comment
i love her sarcasm :O
this is a really nice
thing of u to do
i like this poem & the fact that
u wrote this for a friend makes it more special
keep it up! Good poem

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