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Array ( [sid] => 11072 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Write [time] => 2003-01-23 21:00:00 [hometext] => Freiends are brilliant creations.... [bodytext] => I couldn't sleep
and you weren't around
to tell me it was okay
I wrote the wrong words
to describe what I felt
because I didn't want anyone to know
that beneath it all
was a gentle voice
that had started screaming to be let out

And she says, write
because she thinks my words are beautiful
and I want to read her words upon the page
because I love them
I love her words
she ran to see me today
literally ran to be by my side
to ask me if I was okay
and what had happened
I guess I sounded urgent
I guess I was desperate to tell her

that I was in love

and she laughed
and I wanted her to be in love
so she would know
just what it was like
to fly [comments] => 3 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 16 [informant] => Raidne [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Write

Contributed by Raidne on Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

I couldn't sleep
and you weren't around
to tell me it was okay
I wrote the wrong words
to describe what I felt
because I didn't want anyone to know
that beneath it all
was a gentle voice
that had started screaming to be let out

And she says, write
because she thinks my words are beautiful
and I want to read her words upon the page
because I love them
I love her words
she ran to see me today
literally ran to be by my side
to ask me if I was okay
and what had happened
I guess I sounded urgent
I guess I was desperate to tell her

that I was in love

and she laughed
and I wanted her to be in love
so she would know
just what it was like
to fly

Copyright © Raidne ... [ 2003-01-23 21:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Write (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 05:16:27 PM AEST
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wowwwww... your last is the sweetest in this elegant poem.. ahh and ahhhh..

Re: Write (User Rating: 1 )
by audreyann on Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 07:31:14 PM AEST
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awwww, thats so sweet!

Re: Write (User Rating: 1 )
by moon_light on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 08:48:34 PM AEST
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wonderfull
i wish i knew a guy that would right something like that for me show it to her.
love
moon light

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