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Array ( [sid] => 110857 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Need Help [time] => 2005-12-03 18:55:53 [hometext] => my life [bodytext] => Now, what do I do?
You all know what I have been thru
I needed the time away,
But I can't do it without you.

I miss my friends
Most of all
I have done nothing
but bounce off the wall.

I need help in my life
Once again
i don't even know
Who's a foe or a friend

I just want my life back
as ****** as it was
I don't even care
What anyone does... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 43 [informant] => shortgurl2006 [notes] => |||||||Partially edited out, due to the use of letters and an exclamation mark to indicate a banned word. Note: Failure to adhere to site rules can result in the termination of your membership. Consider yourself warned! Thank you. ♦Moderator_14♦||||||| [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

I Need Help

Contributed by shortgurl2006 on Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 06:55:53 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Now, what do I do?
You all know what I have been thru
I needed the time away,
But I can't do it without you.

I miss my friends
Most of all
I have done nothing
but bounce off the wall.

I need help in my life
Once again
i don't even know
Who's a foe or a friend

I just want my life back
as ****** as it was
I don't even care
What anyone does...

Copyright © shortgurl2006 ... [ 2005-12-03 18:55:53]
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Re: I Need Help (User Rating: 1 )
by Karazoul on Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 12:48:58 PM AEST
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an other good one......

Re: I Need Help (User Rating: 1 )
by outlaw_mutiny on Sunday, 25th December 2005 @ 09:33:40 PM AEST
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this was a good write keep it up

Re: I Need Help (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 08:33:19 PM AEST
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I know how you feel. I feel that everyone i n my life has abandoned me and others I fell I abandoned. But I think Im at a point where help won't help.

Great poem!

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