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As I look
Contributed by
d-day
on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 03:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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As I look into
the innocence of
your eyes,
I see what I should be.
As I think about
what you mean to me,
I see that I should
change my ways.
As I watch you
come into a new life,
I see whats
wrong with mine.
As I touch your
small, frail body,
I see the
error of my ways.
As I watch you open
your eyes for the first time,
I see what I've done wrong,
and where I should go.
Copyright ©
d-day
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2003-01-24 03:40:00]
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Re: As I look
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 11:30:49 AM AEST
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| d day Why the guilty conscience? But it is a nice neat piece. Doesn't waste words |
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