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searching for answears running from thuth this is the way of harvesting the youth

keep them guessing surrounded by lies make them all wanting to die

soldiers in training thats all i see a violent society created by tv

goverments throwing your future away only worried about the cost you will pay

no career goals no true plans pick a trade become a man

join the army and be all you can be kill a man get school for free

waive your flag take the land wash your hands in the blood of the land

build your towers inslave the poor give them drugs let them score

sell sex make teenagers your lust while your 40 living in disgust

drive your car pollute the air let the wind blow threw your hair

drop your litter spread it on the ground just remember you wear the crown

wallow in spite feed off your greed you arnt the needy you can succeed

knife in the back career advance this is the way you glide on the track

bury your soul empty and lost surrounded by glam you have just lost

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creative track

Contributed by lostrelic on Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 03:26:46 PM in AEST
Topic: oops




searching for answears running from thuth this is the way of harvesting the youth

keep them guessing surrounded by lies make them all wanting to die

soldiers in training thats all i see a violent society created by tv

goverments throwing your future away only worried about the cost you will pay

no career goals no true plans pick a trade become a man

join the army and be all you can be kill a man get school for free

waive your flag take the land wash your hands in the blood of the land

build your towers inslave the poor give them drugs let them score

sell sex make teenagers your lust while your 40 living in disgust

drive your car pollute the air let the wind blow threw your hair

drop your litter spread it on the ground just remember you wear the crown

wallow in spite feed off your greed you arnt the needy you can succeed

knife in the back career advance this is the way you glide on the track

bury your soul empty and lost surrounded by glam you have just lost





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Re: creative track (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 03:32:06 PM AEST
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A poem that reminds us that we've all been there and done that, yet good 2 see it still recognized by another generation, and the beat goes on from the first 2 the 21 century, why am i not surprised? great peice good continuity.


Ben


Re: creative track (User Rating: 1 )
by CaseyRedman on Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 03:44:46 PM AEST
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good poem nice job


Re: creative track (User Rating: 1 )
by CaseyRedman on Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 03:45:27 PM AEST
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nice poem


Re: creative track (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_and_Cold on Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 04:49:22 PM AEST
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I liked this poem, you had a great message and some great lines, but it seems very rough, if you reworked it and made the structure and flow a little tighter I'd be even better.

Brandin


Re: creative track (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 05:52:14 PM AEST
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Many great lines here. Some misspellings though. I liked your message. Peace to you, Laura


Re: creative track (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 02:54:00 AM AEST
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made many great points about the world we live in today. I appreciate your honesty and style

Michelle


Re: creative track (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 03:26:52 AM AEST
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An open and honest write penned so well Reagan. I like the message u bring across to ur reader. Well done and keep on penning.
*hugs*
~sue~


Re: creative track (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 08:44:14 AM AEST
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blimey you had, had a bad day!!! good read,, couple of speelin mishtakes, :-)




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