Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 09-June 19:01:02 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 111070 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => THE LAST PUFF [time] => 2005-12-07 01:01:24 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Sitting outside with no place to go,
looking deep into my shadow,
trying to figure out what ive been missing,
think what if god was listening.
What will happen to me,
now trying to plea,
trying to make everything thats wrong,
right,
trying to change my ways,
from all those uncountable days,
what was i thinking,
realizing i cant blink,
now seeing that link,
why did i roll them leaves and seeds,
thats the last time i touch any weed. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 513 [topic] => 66 [informant] => STECKS [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )
THE LAST PUFF

Contributed by STECKS on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 01:01:24 AM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse



Sitting outside with no place to go,
looking deep into my shadow,
trying to figure out what ive been missing,
think what if god was listening.
What will happen to me,
now trying to plea,
trying to make everything thats wrong,
right,
trying to change my ways,
from all those uncountable days,
what was i thinking,
realizing i cant blink,
now seeing that link,
why did i roll them leaves and seeds,
thats the last time i touch any weed.




Copyright © STECKS ... [ 2005-12-07 01:01:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: THE LAST PUFF (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 02:37:36 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
A big warm welcome to YPDC. I hope u enjoy it here. This is a very well penned piece of poetry. An excellent first submission.

why did i roll them leaves and seeds,
thats the last time i touch any weed.

I hope and pray u dont touch the stuff anymore. Well done and I hope to read some more of ur work real soon.
*hugs*
~sue~


Re: THE LAST PUFF (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 08:39:24 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
until the next time,,, good read :-)


Re: THE LAST PUFF (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 07:09:50 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Stecks
Any habit can be hard to break.I hope you succede,
A n ice poem on self strggle.

Sinned


Re: THE LAST PUFF (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 06:56:45 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
2 each his own.
Awesome writing.
huggs,
emy


Re: THE LAST PUFF (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 10:34:09 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
very nice poem welcome to ypdc




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com