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HEY are you there? are you listening your only a slave

they are the ones who taught you how to behave

SEE those shakles you have had them since birth

born in a world tha`'s spent all it's worth

LOST is our call only finding more blind

chained to a clock pondering lost time

SOLDIERS are marching spreading there ground

a united front black gold only found

A country that's divided they say will not stand

but the borders we build we section the land

POWER just mice in grey fancy suits telling US what's the rules

while do as I say not like I do is sung by by those same fools

YOU can say this but you can't say that even if it's politically correct

we walk on glass when we write trying not to offend or upset

PICKED apart with care intense to equall all beliefs

it's offensive to say merry christmas and have a manger on the street

OVERREACTING and pointing fingers all in different ways

not looking at the true criminals on which our goverment displays

VACATION trips three houses and a yacht all bought on your wage

now who should your finer point at who should get all your rage

THOUGHTS and revolutions like a cloud it fades away

but it must build a steady steady steam I can't wait to see that day
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THOUGHTS and revolutions

Contributed by lostrelic on Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 03:08:52 PM in AEST
Topic: oops




HEY are you there? are you listening your only a slave

they are the ones who taught you how to behave

SEE those shakles you have had them since birth

born in a world tha`'s spent all it's worth

LOST is our call only finding more blind

chained to a clock pondering lost time

SOLDIERS are marching spreading there ground

a united front black gold only found

A country that's divided they say will not stand

but the borders we build we section the land

POWER just mice in grey fancy suits telling US what's the rules

while do as I say not like I do is sung by by those same fools

YOU can say this but you can't say that even if it's politically correct

we walk on glass when we write trying not to offend or upset

PICKED apart with care intense to equall all beliefs

it's offensive to say merry christmas and have a manger on the street

OVERREACTING and pointing fingers all in different ways

not looking at the true criminals on which our goverment displays

VACATION trips three houses and a yacht all bought on your wage

now who should your finer point at who should get all your rage

THOUGHTS and revolutions like a cloud it fades away

but it must build a steady steady steam I can't wait to see that day




Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2005-12-08 15:08:52]
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Re: THOUGHTS and revolutions (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 04:57:20 PM AEST
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Cool piece, thought provokin, i like ur style :-)


Re: THOUGHTS and revolutions (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 07:36:39 PM AEST
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Its so true. This was a neat poem. Hope you have more coming!




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