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Looking into the ebony sky for stars
Although the stars burned out years ago
Blinking lights from the sky still glow

A shooting star has long been a myth
A fairy tale that we all have missed
Those lights still flicker in the night
But they aren't stars, just a billion satellites

Satellites that are watching us from space
Their telescopic cameras centering on your face
A face more beautiful than the last sea
Which is bound to dry out in the coming weeks

We'll rest under the only tree for miles
In a world about to die, I'll remember your smile
This is our love in a distant future
Older than time, but the same as before
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Love in a Distant Future

Contributed by heartquake on Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 04:59:38 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

Laying on grassless ground in the dark
Looking into the ebony sky for stars
Although the stars burned out years ago
Blinking lights from the sky still glow

A shooting star has long been a myth
A fairy tale that we all have missed
Those lights still flicker in the night
But they aren't stars, just a billion satellites

Satellites that are watching us from space
Their telescopic cameras centering on your face
A face more beautiful than the last sea
Which is bound to dry out in the coming weeks

We'll rest under the only tree for miles
In a world about to die, I'll remember your smile
This is our love in a distant future
Older than time, but the same as before

Copyright © heartquake ... [ 2005-12-11 16:59:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Love in a Distant Future (User Rating: 1 )
by JacobsKK on Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 11:02:06 PM AEST
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That was pretty, It makes me wanna go watchh the stars :D

Re: Love in a Distant Future (User Rating: 1 )
by Blissfulviolet on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 02:09:16 AM AEST
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Love the imagery...

Re: Love in a Distant Future (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 03:35:20 AM AEST
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yeah it's truly hard to hide anything these days.
huggs,
emy

Re: Love in a Distant Future (User Rating: 1 )
by RandyMan on Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 01:39:57 PM AEST
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How true, how true. I would say more, but I may be being watched! Good write.

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