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And to let it out is my only goal
You see this is a rage that I just cannot let go
This hate grew a long long time ago
And all these years had givin it time to grow
It gave me a heart that is as cold as the whitest snow
This black hole of anger is eating me whole
And of it I have no control
This fire that I admire
Makes me quiver with such desire
This rage helps me inspire
You may call me crazy and a liar
But without this maddness I am but a flat tire
Unable to move this weight on my back
Because this feeling inside leaves me ready to attack
Never to be weak when stranded fromt he pack
My rage is my weapon and it is always ready for combat
See I could be just like you but I am not to fond of that
Could I kill if needed
Oh yes cuz I refuse to be defeated
My garden of weakness has been weeded
Rage is my friend
And we will walk hand in hand until the bloody end












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Rage...what a feeling

Contributed by poetic_influence on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 05:02:51 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



This fury that lays deep down in my heart an soul
And to let it out is my only goal
You see this is a rage that I just cannot let go
This hate grew a long long time ago
And all these years had givin it time to grow
It gave me a heart that is as cold as the whitest snow
This black hole of anger is eating me whole
And of it I have no control
This fire that I admire
Makes me quiver with such desire
This rage helps me inspire
You may call me crazy and a liar
But without this maddness I am but a flat tire
Unable to move this weight on my back
Because this feeling inside leaves me ready to attack
Never to be weak when stranded fromt he pack
My rage is my weapon and it is always ready for combat
See I could be just like you but I am not to fond of that
Could I kill if needed
Oh yes cuz I refuse to be defeated
My garden of weakness has been weeded
Rage is my friend
And we will walk hand in hand until the bloody end
















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Re: Rage...what a feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by boobiepeach on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 05:08:27 PM AEST
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wonderful write!
i like the use of the four ryming sections.
well done and good use of emotion

peach


Re: Rage...what a feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 05:16:12 PM AEST
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geez this is way better than any of my ***** off poems. great job. i can really relate to feeling like this.


Re: Rage...what a feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 06:11:18 PM AEST
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Liked the rythm, good piece


Re: Rage...what a feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by Packatack on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 08:52:08 PM AEST
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Hey kickass poem! my rage is my weapon n it is always ready for combat! i was in the military and some ppl thats what u use to survive





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