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Array ( [sid] => 111376 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fantasy or Hell [time] => 2005-12-12 21:02:18 [hometext] => Just tell me what you think... life carries on, only I watch it crumble around my broken and torn soul... thanks everyone [bodytext] => Fantasy is the vision of the place that I will never reach
It surrounds me only I cannot truly reside there.
It is the dream that you envision yet can never feel the happiness
Yet I only see you…
You are my fantasy, my dream, my one and only
I see you in your bright and glorious being
I only see you as my most beautiful angel, only you are not mine to keep
You are leaving me, flying home to be where you have been called to.
You have been called home, home to heaven above…
Another fantasy that I will never reach
For without you I am nothing, only a rotting demon upon this hellish earth
I remain for you, please don’t leave me I scream to you!
Only you lift your wings and take flight, away… to never return
I love you, I lived for you, and now I bleed and die for you
Through my sacrifice you may see my love for you, the more I bleed the more you will see
The blood begins to flow down my hands…it streams to the floor
As the puddle around my feet grows you glance down from your heavenly seat
You see me crying, crying for my angel
Then I see you, I see through the darkening clouds to your beautiful face
And then to more horror I watch you turn around, and again fly… away…
I fall to my knees and plead with the devil, for one more time to see you
Yet as I fall into his hands the only memory I take with me is your face… as you turn and leave me forever.
My hell is watching you leave, my fantasy is your face… which may I claim?
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Fantasy or Hell

Contributed by Mallard8 on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 09:02:18 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Fantasy is the vision of the place that I will never reach
It surrounds me only I cannot truly reside there.
It is the dream that you envision yet can never feel the happiness
Yet I only see you…
You are my fantasy, my dream, my one and only
I see you in your bright and glorious being
I only see you as my most beautiful angel, only you are not mine to keep
You are leaving me, flying home to be where you have been called to.
You have been called home, home to heaven above…
Another fantasy that I will never reach
For without you I am nothing, only a rotting demon upon this hellish earth
I remain for you, please don’t leave me I scream to you!
Only you lift your wings and take flight, away… to never return
I love you, I lived for you, and now I bleed and die for you
Through my sacrifice you may see my love for you, the more I bleed the more you will see
The blood begins to flow down my hands…it streams to the floor
As the puddle around my feet grows you glance down from your heavenly seat
You see me crying, crying for my angel
Then I see you, I see through the darkening clouds to your beautiful face
And then to more horror I watch you turn around, and again fly… away…
I fall to my knees and plead with the devil, for one more time to see you
Yet as I fall into his hands the only memory I take with me is your face… as you turn and leave me forever.
My hell is watching you leave, my fantasy is your face… which may I claim?




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Re: Fantasy or Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Kayden on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 09:25:16 PM AEST
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O MY GOSH!!! this is awesome, i havent read such a good one as this for a long time. Incredible feeling i felt as though i was going through it myself. Sorry for you loss. Incredible


Re: Fantasy or Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by sararose1950 on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 10:02:53 PM AEST
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wonderful write indeed-thank you for sharing -letting us feel it too
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