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Something to Appreciate
Contributed by
linagalMBfan01
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Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 02:35:32 PM in AEST
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Turn this sadness into hate Something you will appreciate Let the blood run down as I run myself into the ground get to the point I yell I'm not feeling all to well My heart is split in two and it's all because of you I gave you my heart whole when you left there was a hole there's nothing left to say ever since you pushed me away the loving way we used to stare it is now this hating glare the happiness we once had is now the emptiness we have can we still be friends even though these are the ends the end of being together the end of our forever No more love and no more hate Something we both can appreciate
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Re: Something to Appreciate
(User Rating: 1 ) by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 02:43:09 PM AEST (User
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it is a good poem with a good flow good work
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Re: Something to Appreciate
(User Rating: 1 ) by amitos on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 02:58:59 PM AEST (User
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i think that you have mixed the feelings of heart break and hope together ; something that i think cannot go together. i don't know your age but i think you must be young. if you want the other person to come back then write something where there is only hope not pain... but i can see u growing... keep it up |
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Re: Something to Appreciate
(User Rating: 1 ) by hellsfallenangel on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 03:33:48 PM AEST (User
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very good write sylina i like it alot well i g2g i have to try and make a new poem. ttyl bye bye
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Re: Something to Appreciate
(User Rating: 1 ) by thumper on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 11:40:54 AM AEST (User
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There's some people that you just can't be friends with once you break up. In a perfect world it's possible, but not here. lol I'm sorry you are in pain. I hope it goes away soon. ;o) Your writes are getting better and better. : ) Write on Linagal, write on!!!
Love you,
Gramma ;o) |
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