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A little girl speaks harshly to a sister or brother.
They mimmic things seen to the third generation;
The pattern established from onset of creation.

They learned it from their parents,
or another, who learned it too,
from parents of his own raising;
that's just what children do.

This way the curse is conveyed to plague humanity still:
A plague only allayed, by Christ, at the Father's will.
Salvation was accomplished with righteousness held intact.
God's Son, the perfect child, absorbed sin's horrible impact.

Lionel

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Man, and God's Contribution

Contributed by Lionel on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 04:52:02 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry



A little boy acts cruelly to one playmate or another.
A little girl speaks harshly to a sister or brother.
They mimmic things seen to the third generation;
The pattern established from onset of creation.

They learned it from their parents,
or another, who learned it too,
from parents of his own raising;
that's just what children do.

This way the curse is conveyed to plague humanity still:
A plague only allayed, by Christ, at the Father's will.
Salvation was accomplished with righteousness held intact.
God's Son, the perfect child, absorbed sin's horrible impact.

Lionel





Copyright © Lionel ... [ 2005-12-13 16:52:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Man, and God's Contribution (User Rating: 1 )
by buddhistpunk on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 05:04:32 PM AEST
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Very nice poem, short simple and true.
Reminds me of stevie wonders writing style


Re: Man, and God's Contribution (User Rating: 1 )
by Summerwine on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 07:25:25 PM AEST
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Excellent read...ty...SUMMER


Re: Man, and God's Contribution (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 10:10:05 AM AEST
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Wonderful write, - the harsh truth that children cannot do better than the parents do and are bound to imitate them.
Only HE can overcome the terrible impact, the perfect child and perfect man, and has the power to blot out and absorb the horrible impact of sin.
Inspring and wonderful write Lionel.

Blessed Christmas!
Elizabeth


Re: Man, and God's Contribution (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 11:41:34 AM AEST
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well now, and where did I hear this from.. need more poems pushed on this subject.. RL


Re: Man, and God's Contribution (User Rating: 1 )
by enigma on Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 05:59:29 PM AEST
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...indeed...the whole thing seems insanely irrational to this finite creature...but, I just totally melt when They smile at me...

...Truth, very nicely packaged...

ron...enigma


Re: Man, and God's Contribution (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 10:09:33 AM AEST
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well done


Re: Man, and God's Contribution (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 11:12:10 PM AEST
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This really brings to the front of my mind exactly what Christ did for us and that we should be forever in His debt.

It's a shame that in this day and age,

( with a moral and religious decline)

that youger children arn't taught as much as previous generations of the sacrifice Christ made for us.

J.


Re: Man, and God's Contribution (User Rating: 1 )
by BobbyZimmerman on Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 05:30:40 PM AEST
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Very interesting write....it is true that our first influences are our parents, and we pick up many of our good and bad traits and habits from them....Sadly, most children from abusive households will one day beat their spouse. A depressing truth very well articulated in this piece.....kudos.


Re: Man, and God's Contribution (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 05:33:17 PM AEST
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great write very well done
quite an impact he took
it is why i have a reason for everything and why i will try my best to be a good role model

catz


Re: Man, and God's Contribution (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 29th November 2014 @ 07:55:04 PM AEST
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i believe it is true how one is raised, however we all make our
own choices on how we will live and interact with others,

hugs n' love nessa




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