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bright eyes
Contributed by
buddhistpunk
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Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 04:59:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Bright eyes
Sometimes I wonder what Im doing here, spinning on this ball, Its so frustrating when youre waiting for the moon to fall, The skys so shrouded in a veil of cloud, It doesnt seem theres a sun at all.
Ive learnt a few things with my face down in the dirt, How we hurt the ones we love and love the ones we hurt, I tried to be true to you, dont you know it hurt me too, Some people never say the words I love you
Gotta keep on tryin Keep your head up high an When you dont know where youre going Just swim with the river flowin Cause someones gonna come around and Lift you from the ground, Theyre gonna take you higher Turn your life around like
Your Big Bright Eyes Light up my Dark Night Skies, Oh dont you realise, I dont know what to do, Just to say that I love you, Im tender to your touch, yeah I love you that much.
A million steps Ive taken tryin to find the perfect town, A hundred hands Ive shaken every one Ive been around But the only hand worth takin is one I still havent found Are you the one to lift me from the ground,
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Re: bright eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by Shmokin on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 07:13:31 PM AEST (User
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i enjoyed this,, a bit jumbled, but enjoyable :-) |
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Re: bright eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by Packatack on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:14:49 PM AEST (User
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Wow thats a good poem, 'Cause someone gonna' come around n lift you outta the ground' like that part best |
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Re: bright eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by lifeslittleangel on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 10:19:58 AM AEST (User
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This poem has potential but needs a little work
I think it's actually pretty good though |
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