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Array ( [sid] => 111520 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Angie [time] => 2005-12-15 08:26:07 [hometext] => Sometimes life cuts like a knife, and they say things happen for a reason? [bodytext] => My heart is sinking,
so very deep.
I feel so heavy,
I just want to weep.
My friend is leaving tomorrow- already!
I cannot start work ,
feeling calm and steady.
[Things happen for a reason ]
so I believe.
But why do I feel ,
I just want to grieve?
We exercised each night.
Probably chatted faster than we walked!
But life living for -them- here,
was not successful is what they thought.
I hate goodbyes.
As I always say,
"I'll visit you soon"
but life never goes my way!
So many friends have slipped out of my life.
I don't want to loose another friend,
it cuts like a knife!
I cannot cope with finding another pal.
One that I can trust.
and understands this gal.
So the next few days,
will be so hard to bare.
But my guess you guys,
probably won't even...care?

[I don't want to sound mean.[with that last line]...just that really...I just have to get used of it.
Life is all about changes and somethings will not go ones own way,
I just needed to write this poem... to get all my emotions out of me!] bye coni

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Angie

Contributed by inoc on Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 08:26:07 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

My heart is sinking,
so very deep.
I feel so heavy,
I just want to weep.
My friend is leaving tomorrow- already!
I cannot start work ,
feeling calm and steady.
[Things happen for a reason ]
so I believe.
But why do I feel ,
I just want to grieve?
We exercised each night.
Probably chatted faster than we walked!
But life living for -them- here,
was not successful is what they thought.
I hate goodbyes.
As I always say,
"I'll visit you soon"
but life never goes my way!
So many friends have slipped out of my life.
I don't want to loose another friend,
it cuts like a knife!
I cannot cope with finding another pal.
One that I can trust.
and understands this gal.
So the next few days,
will be so hard to bare.
But my guess you guys,
probably won't even...care?

[I don't want to sound mean.[with that last line]...just that really...I just have to get used of it.
Life is all about changes and somethings will not go ones own way,
I just needed to write this poem... to get all my emotions out of me!] bye coni

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Re: Angie (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 09:53:05 AM AEST
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awwww coni.... I can feel the pain in this one.
And I DO understand that last line....all too well.

Re: Angie (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 11:38:23 AM AEST
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Oh Coni, you are doing the right thing to tell about your pain in losing another friend.

It does ;not happen to you alone Coni. We all have to cope with great losses. But there is a reason - genuine pain is never lost.
Who knows what He will do with it? A gain elsehwer? No pain is ever lost when offered for the greater Glory of God.
We feel with you! - Emphasize. Thanks for sharing it with us in these sad and beaujtiful lines.
May the joy and peace of Christmas be with you

Elizabeth

Re: Angie (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 09:42:45 PM AEST
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I do care, and it was a good last thing to say, for so many must realize, even if another person does not say it, they have feelings, I have learned I must say it out loud, for even if your reply back to you is, no you do not relate to this, you don't understand etc, but its ok, still say it to people, because in time, it does heal, all good loving words heal.. all take the time to let their friends and family know just how much you care, hug and kiss them, for there is no promise that you or anyone else will be here on earth in the next sec. min. hour, day or tomorrow.. my prayers go out to you and your loved ones coni.. just remember that pain does turn one to God, when we are in pain, sometimes we can lose hope, but never do that, always keep going, never quit, and your loved ones do go to heaven, all goes to heaven, unless they are so wicked and do not turn from their evil ways, I will see a lot of people in heaven with me.. God is pure love.. always remember that, and say His name over and over again, for He is very near in your pain.. Raquel Leah :D

Re: Angie (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 09:44:53 PM AEST
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God is pure love.. always remember that, and say His name over and over again, for He is very near in your pain.. Raquel Leah :D

Re: Angie (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 05:56:51 AM AEST
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Coni,

it's okay to feel bitter at relatively anonymous others - the one person who is making you angry because she is leaving you, well it doesn'r make sense to spoil your remaining time together with any resentment of tension. Its hard to make good friends, and it is a grieving process when they leave. So Kubler-Ross was right - shock, denial, anger, acceptance - it doesn't just apply to death.

Spike

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