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Array ( [sid] => 111532 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mistake [time] => 2005-12-15 13:11:03 [hometext] => This is cruel, I will be the first to admit that. But I wrote this at a point when I was extremely annoyed and needed a way to vent those feelings...this is what came out [bodytext] => A mometary lapse in reason
A second without thought
And now you lay broken on the floor
A mistake I almost forgot

I broke it to you nicely
It's really better this way
but you won't let go of my hand
And I refuse to stay

I'm sorry that I led you on
Did we ever even kiss
I don't want to have to avoid you
But you're not something I'll miss

You're overbaring
You won't let go
You're holding on too tight
How many times must I say no

Now I relish whenever you're gone
I don't know what to do
I'd rather be alone forever
Than spend my time with you [comments] => 2 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 6 [informant] => jessie53067 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Mistake

Contributed by jessie53067 on Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 01:11:03 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

A mometary lapse in reason
A second without thought
And now you lay broken on the floor
A mistake I almost forgot

I broke it to you nicely
It's really better this way
but you won't let go of my hand
And I refuse to stay

I'm sorry that I led you on
Did we ever even kiss
I don't want to have to avoid you
But you're not something I'll miss

You're overbaring
You won't let go
You're holding on too tight
How many times must I say no

Now I relish whenever you're gone
I don't know what to do
I'd rather be alone forever
Than spend my time with you

Copyright © jessie53067 ... [ 2005-12-15 13:11:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by Dri on Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 02:35:03 PM AEST
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be very very careful of how you treat other people. in my general experience, you screw someone over and good ol' karma comes around and smacks you in the head. i lost the love of my life. if you have to let someone go, do it gently.

this write is very brutally honest. i like it.

Re: Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by jdawg on Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 07:34:42 AM AEST
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WOW.. i like and dislike the poem.. first with the dislike.. cuz it's so.. well like the other comment.. brutal.. but then again i like it cuz i've felt that way torwards someone before but i didn't tell them how i felt in that type of way.. i did it more gently.. but truly a good write.. best of wishes
~Justin L.~

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