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Array ( [sid] => 111643 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Waiting [time] => 2005-12-17 07:07:06 [hometext] => This poem is about losing the one you love and having to wait for them to come back. [bodytext] => What am I supposed to do
With you so far away from me?
How am I supposed to go on
When I just want you and me to be?

Without you I feel so alone
I dont think I can survive
Without you I can't even breath
I just want to feel alive

But you're so far away from me
Miles and miles apart
I wish I had wings, so I could fly to you
For you're forever in my heart

I guess I have got to wait
To wait for us to be together
It seems so long since I have seen you
But if I have to, I will wait forever [comments] => 3 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Inspirational101 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Waiting

Contributed by Inspirational101 on Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 07:07:06 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

What am I supposed to do
With you so far away from me?
How am I supposed to go on
When I just want you and me to be?

Without you I feel so alone
I dont think I can survive
Without you I can't even breath
I just want to feel alive

But you're so far away from me
Miles and miles apart
I wish I had wings, so I could fly to you
For you're forever in my heart

I guess I have got to wait
To wait for us to be together
It seems so long since I have seen you
But if I have to, I will wait forever

Copyright © Inspirational101 ... [ 2005-12-17 07:07:06]
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Re: Waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 07:58:02 AM AEST
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I know the feeling. Great writing.
huggs,
emy

Re: Waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 01:45:52 PM AEST
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I know how you feel, i've felt the exact same way, i've loved a person for five years, but with her so far away, how can I hope to get to her, to be with her and or to make her happy? I know how you feel. SLipSiX.

Never leave the person you love for the person you like, because the person you like will leave you for the person they love. SLipSiX. Somebody wrote it on the chalkboard. Lol.

Re: Waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen54 on Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 07:47:10 PM AEST
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This one too hits close to home. I was in a long distance relationship and I felt like this everyday. Awsome job.
-Jen

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