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Magic Land
Contributed by
gwenevere
on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 05:18:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Hush now listen can you hear Fairy queen is drawing near She will take you by the hand Fly you to her magic land
Floating through the air so free Many things for you to see Moon and stars and fireflies Wipe the sleep from out your eyes
She will take you to a lake Sail a boat of lemon cake Fountain there for you to drink Foaming milk of strawberry pink
Lie beneath marshmallow skies Wait there for your next surprise Unicorn for you to ride Merlin, wizard is your guide
Wander through a chocolate wood And if you are very good You will see a dragon there Watch his flame, the nostrils flare
Can you hear your mother call Cascade down that waterfall Back to sleep you sleepy head Wake up safe within your bed
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gwenevere
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Re: Magic Land
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 05:31:53 PM AEST (User
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Very magical write.
I'll take a big chunk of chocoalet if u don't mind.
Huggs, smiles, Happy holidays,
emy |
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Re: Magic Land
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 10:08:38 AM AEST (User
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weeeeee! i'm a kid again this was a refreshing experience ros, as beautiful as ever . . .
Ben |
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Re: Magic Land
(User Rating: 1 ) by Marko on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 01:50:51 PM AEST (User
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EXCELLENT i could feel the imagination it was like reading charlie and the choclate factory good work gwenevere |
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Re: Magic Land
(User Rating: 1 ) by RandyMan on
Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 01:36:02 PM AEST (User
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A beautiful dream. Now the kid may need to see a dentist for the cavities, lol. Exellent write. |
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Re: Magic Land
(User Rating: 1 ) by candysears on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 05:24:28 PM AEST (User
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Brilliants reveals again...I love it.
God Bless!.
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