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Array ( [sid] => 11171 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Drowning in Depression [time] => 2003-01-25 00:20:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => So deep, im drowning,
in an ocean of despair,
dont save me, dont love me,
for soon, i wont be there,
this razor, this gun,
could cost me my life,
but it just doesnt matter,
its not worth the strife,
just kill me, you hate me,
i know that you do,
no one, can love me,
i mean it, its true,
maybe im too sweet,
maybe im cruel,
but one thing ill never be,
is a depressing fool,
to see the world act,
like they know so much,
even though theyve never even,
felt depressions touch,
even though theyve never,
cried themselves to sleep,
they still act like they know,
but they will never know me,
dont feel sorry when im gone,
you never cared before,
to see thinking i was happy,
i made my heart so sore,
please dont act like you love me,
you never did, you never will,
but when i need to leave you,
somehow i know...
ill miss you still. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 235 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Chanti [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Drowning in Depression

Contributed by Chanti on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 12:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

So deep, im drowning,
in an ocean of despair,
dont save me, dont love me,
for soon, i wont be there,
this razor, this gun,
could cost me my life,
but it just doesnt matter,
its not worth the strife,
just kill me, you hate me,
i know that you do,
no one, can love me,
i mean it, its true,
maybe im too sweet,
maybe im cruel,
but one thing ill never be,
is a depressing fool,
to see the world act,
like they know so much,
even though theyve never even,
felt depressions touch,
even though theyve never,
cried themselves to sleep,
they still act like they know,
but they will never know me,
dont feel sorry when im gone,
you never cared before,
to see thinking i was happy,
i made my heart so sore,
please dont act like you love me,
you never did, you never will,
but when i need to leave you,
somehow i know...
ill miss you still.

Copyright © Chanti ... [ 2003-01-25 00:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Drowning in Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 02:08:04 AM AEST
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Wow this was so sad... I don't even know what to say this was so well written and such a heart rending poem. Beautiful.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Drowning in Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 05:48:31 AM AEST
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it Is very sad..venkat

Re: Drowning in Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by Linny on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 05:17:48 PM AEST
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Wow, somehow its like you know how I feel sometimes. It really touched me and it doesnt beat around the bush. You wrote from your heart and the heart of many others as well.

~Linny

Re: Drowning in Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by Fiona on Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 03:06:17 AM AEST
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Wow, this poem is amazing...I am speechless, you wrote it so well and it was just so deep. Amazing.

Re: Drowning in Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by Delusions on Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 05:28:43 AM AEST
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THis was awsome... wonderfully written and full of passion! Keep it up! ~delusions~

Re: Drowning in Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 10:24:02 AM AEST
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i can totaly relate to this, it seems to be pretty much the style i right in... dark that is, amazing...

broken skin
xxx

Re: Drowning in Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by Pompous on Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 08:14:37 AM AEST
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Thats so sad...but its amazing.

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