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Array ( [sid] => 111718 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Do you still remember...? [time] => 2005-12-18 20:24:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => If the words existed I would call them out to you
To explain this feeling
Or to just simply make you see

The way my heart breaks
How you really make me feel

When you do these things
And say those words
How I fall apart inside
And how a little of me dies

The way the tears fall...
I know you've been here too...
I know I wasn't always good
But neither were you...


We have both failed each other
We both have our mistakes...
But a little bit of trying
Is all that it would take...

When you don’t want to fix it
And you’re happy how things are...
It makes me wonder where we're heading
And how much you really care...

The words you say are sweet
And you paint a pretty picture
But they all fall apart... they seem to disappear
When I see the other things...

All I ask is, you tell me where we are
Tell me how it is...
That’s not too much to ask
From someone who is your friend
A little bit of truth never hurt anyone
And it won’t hurt us either...

But when I don’t get the truth
It makes me think that you are lying
And when I think you’re lying
I know that you aren’t trying
So if you think you can give up
Then why cant I….?
If we really look at the past
You’d see how much more I cried…
I remember all our happy times
And all the love we shared
I remember how you smiled
And how it let me know you cared...

We only want one thing...
Or at least we both used to...
Happiness is near at hand
It still hangs in the balance,
It’s at the tips of our fingers,
If only you still want it....

I’m only asking you be honest
And keep your word to me…
And when you start to tell the truth…
That’s when You and I can be… [comments] => 4 [counter] => 288 [topic] => 48 [informant] => holderofthestone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Do you still remember...?

Contributed by holderofthestone on Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 08:24:30 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



If the words existed I would call them out to you
To explain this feeling
Or to just simply make you see

The way my heart breaks
How you really make me feel

When you do these things
And say those words
How I fall apart inside
And how a little of me dies

The way the tears fall...
I know you've been here too...
I know I wasn't always good
But neither were you...


We have both failed each other
We both have our mistakes...
But a little bit of trying
Is all that it would take...

When you don’t want to fix it
And you’re happy how things are...
It makes me wonder where we're heading
And how much you really care...

The words you say are sweet
And you paint a pretty picture
But they all fall apart... they seem to disappear
When I see the other things...

All I ask is, you tell me where we are
Tell me how it is...
That’s not too much to ask
From someone who is your friend
A little bit of truth never hurt anyone
And it won’t hurt us either...

But when I don’t get the truth
It makes me think that you are lying
And when I think you’re lying
I know that you aren’t trying
So if you think you can give up
Then why cant I….?
If we really look at the past
You’d see how much more I cried…
I remember all our happy times
And all the love we shared
I remember how you smiled
And how it let me know you cared...

We only want one thing...
Or at least we both used to...
Happiness is near at hand
It still hangs in the balance,
It’s at the tips of our fingers,
If only you still want it....

I’m only asking you be honest
And keep your word to me…
And when you start to tell the truth…
That’s when You and I can be…




Copyright © holderofthestone ... [ 2005-12-18 20:24:30]
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Re: Do you still remember...? (User Rating: 1 )
by crow6279 on Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 03:18:42 AM AEST
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I like the wording. Sometimes I feel like the antagonist here could describe me...and it makes me look within. Thank you


Re: Do you still remember...? (User Rating: 1 )
by coolbreeze17 on Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 04:07:21 AM AEST
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very deep and emotional,, i enjoyed it...


Re: Do you still remember...? (User Rating: 1 )
by Aquaelius on Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 10:52:12 PM AEST
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I can feel a conviction here. I like the turnabout play, the "it's your fault too".

Good one man.

Aq.


Re: Do you still remember...? (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 02:10:19 AM AEST
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i like the words in this poem, nice poem




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