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Array ( [sid] => 111786 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind [time] => 2005-12-19 20:33:20 [hometext] => i saw the film and i thought it was a beautiful story,it really made me think...and cry,i thought i would try to put the same type of experience into my own version of words [bodytext] => By morning you will be dead
dead to my memory
and dead to my heart

gone and ungrieved
away and unmissed

I will unbreak my heart
and unclench my fist

Going...going...

I was so angry that dark, dull night
I SCREAMED...
I screamed because there was no insignificant spot
on your body or soul
which drew me to forgive, which was worthy of my touch

Going...going...

That hurt you know
those words just grasped my heart to make it stop
Someone so beautiful
Something so sad
Whatever happened to the love we had?

Going...going...

That gaze, that glare
The star in the corner of your eye
I notice every time i stare
into the love, passion and true uniqueness
they show
I love you baby

Going...going...

I don't like this
please make it stop
You're in my arms
loved
loved so much
I never want to let go of this incredible love we share
But you are dying in my arms
Stepping further and further away by every...distinct...second

By morning you will be dead
Dead to my memory
and dead to my heart

Gone and unmissed
Away and ungrieved

Going...going...

I wish for the chance to miss you're enticing smile
to want
to need
at the very least to grieve

Going...going...

Please!
The world is such a beautiful place with you by my side
opening my eyes to your world
Stop!

Going...going...

I love you, darling, and i will never forg...

...Gone.


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Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind

Contributed by 8kiwi8 on Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 08:33:20 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



By morning you will be dead
dead to my memory
and dead to my heart

gone and ungrieved
away and unmissed

I will unbreak my heart
and unclench my fist

Going...going...

I was so angry that dark, dull night
I SCREAMED...
I screamed because there was no insignificant spot
on your body or soul
which drew me to forgive, which was worthy of my touch

Going...going...

That hurt you know
those words just grasped my heart to make it stop
Someone so beautiful
Something so sad
Whatever happened to the love we had?

Going...going...

That gaze, that glare
The star in the corner of your eye
I notice every time i stare
into the love, passion and true uniqueness
they show
I love you baby

Going...going...

I don't like this
please make it stop
You're in my arms
loved
loved so much
I never want to let go of this incredible love we share
But you are dying in my arms
Stepping further and further away by every...distinct...second

By morning you will be dead
Dead to my memory
and dead to my heart

Gone and unmissed
Away and ungrieved

Going...going...

I wish for the chance to miss you're enticing smile
to want
to need
at the very least to grieve

Going...going...

Please!
The world is such a beautiful place with you by my side
opening my eyes to your world
Stop!

Going...going...

I love you, darling, and i will never forg...

...Gone.






Copyright © 8kiwi8 ... [ 2005-12-19 20:33:20]
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