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Array ( [sid] => 111896 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Marry Christmas [time] => 2005-12-21 12:07:36 [hometext] => Alone this christmas again and I was hoping to spend it with my girlfriend who just dropped me for some one else. [bodytext] => As I see you laying over there,
In the arms of another,
WELL **** YOU,
All the things you said,
Was just a lie?
You never loved me,
You only played with my heart,
I hate you now and forever more,
One last chance to make things right,
On this the eve of Christmas,
I stand here with a knife in hand,
And say to you,
"Tell me the truth and not some ********,
You know I still love you,
And I always will,
But if you lie to me again,
It will be the end,
So tell me,
Do you love me?"
Suicidal antics run through,
My head every god **** day with out you,
All because of you,
You say you didn’t do anything,
To help me but you have,
And now you are helping me to kill myself.
Do you remember how it felt when he,
Said “A month is too long”,
And do you remember the song you played,
When you ran you bath death,
Do you HUH do you?
You said you never wanted this,
To happen to anyone again,
Well guess what?
It just did, so lay there with him,
Because in the morning,
There will be one more “gift”,
Under the tree,
"Marry ******* Christmas"
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Marry Christmas

Contributed by dalamar on Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 12:07:36 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

As I see you laying over there,
In the arms of another,
WELL **** YOU,
All the things you said,
Was just a lie?
You never loved me,
You only played with my heart,
I hate you now and forever more,
One last chance to make things right,
On this the eve of Christmas,
I stand here with a knife in hand,
And say to you,
"Tell me the truth and not some ********,
You know I still love you,
And I always will,
But if you lie to me again,
It will be the end,
So tell me,
Do you love me?"
Suicidal antics run through,
My head every god **** day with out you,
All because of you,
You say you didn’t do anything,
To help me but you have,
And now you are helping me to kill myself.
Do you remember how it felt when he,
Said “A month is too long”,
And do you remember the song you played,
When you ran you bath death,
Do you HUH do you?
You said you never wanted this,
To happen to anyone again,
Well guess what?
It just did, so lay there with him,
Because in the morning,
There will be one more “gift”,
Under the tree,
"Marry ******* Christmas"

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Re: Marry Christmas (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 06:18:28 PM AEST
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Well done I could feel your heartbreak, but allow me to tell you back in 1998 I was depolyed to Bosnia, everyday I fought for my life, only to find out about my cheating wife, I'd been gone about 3 months it was Christmas Eve, I finally get to speak with my wife only to find out she was 2 months Pegnate, hmm things that make you go hmm, it's not worth it. Great write though, Merry X-mas.

The Phantom

Re: Marry Christmas (User Rating: 1 )
by Jessie53067 on Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 01:44:12 PM AEST
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Amazing write hun...even if it does make me sad (and yes, a little angry) that you were feeling that way...though I can relate somewhat. I'm so sorry that I was gone over christmas...heh, mom missed you too ;). But still...amazing write

-Jessie

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