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Array ( [sid] => 111983 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tonight, I Dine Alone [time] => 2005-12-22 22:38:10 [hometext] => I just letting a little evil escape... not my usual motif here, but I'm giving it a try, exploration of my unknown... DIE!!!!! Mwua-ha-ha-ha-ha!! [bodytext] => Serve up my soul, I have an dark apetite.
A craving for blood, a dark pit inside.
Slowly let the knife pass...
Pour out spirit into a champagne glass.

It's dark in here, I know it is.
My hands still clutch what little hair is left.
I've ripped away all that I recognize.
Bared skin, bared soul.

Serve up my heart, I need to feel pain.
Black sludge pumping, constricting viens.
Squeeze the choked mass...
Pour out spirit into a champagne glass.

I feel cold, a stanger stares back at me.
Streaks of hate are all that stain me.
I've cut out everything I don't like about me.
Oh bared heart... can't bear to be me. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Aquaelius [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Tonight, I Dine Alone

Contributed by Aquaelius on Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 10:38:10 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Serve up my soul, I have an dark apetite.
A craving for blood, a dark pit inside.
Slowly let the knife pass...
Pour out spirit into a champagne glass.

It's dark in here, I know it is.
My hands still clutch what little hair is left.
I've ripped away all that I recognize.
Bared skin, bared soul.

Serve up my heart, I need to feel pain.
Black sludge pumping, constricting viens.
Squeeze the choked mass...
Pour out spirit into a champagne glass.

I feel cold, a stanger stares back at me.
Streaks of hate are all that stain me.
I've cut out everything I don't like about me.
Oh bared heart... can't bear to be me.

Copyright © Aquaelius ... [ 2005-12-22 22:38:10]
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Re: Tonight, I Dine Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by jessejames on Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 10:46:38 PM AEST
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good write keep exploring

Re: Tonight, I Dine Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 09:31:11 PM AEST
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Always good to try out new venues...This is a bit of an abstract, dark piece, and I like the train of thought here. I hope you pursue other styles of poetry in the future, and don't be afraid to open up even more next time, and dig a little deeper. You have a creative edge that needs to be further explored : )
Nicely done.

Scorp.

Re: Tonight, I Dine Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 01:41:19 PM AEST
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I myself am always in favour of branching out. This was a good poem. It was very visually descriptive, and you didn't necessarily use any cliches, or at least not the way I'm used to seeing them being used. This was a good experimentation, and I can only suggest to venture out even further, as I'm sure the second time around in this subject matter will be even deeper of a write. Well done.

Re: Tonight, I Dine Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 05:34:14 AM AEST
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Very gory but well written.
huggs,
emy

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