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Array ( [sid] => 11199 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I Know...I Know [time] => 2003-01-25 12:20:00 [hometext] => Being far away from the girl you love, knowing shes left you so very far behind, doing every thing you can to feel some sort of a connection to her... [bodytext] => I look for it everywhere,
Even though I’m not exactly sure what it is,
Something, anything, that reminds me of your presence,
So I can feel closer to you.

Though the miles they may be many,
Your feelings they may be further,
I still am willing to travel the journey of heartbreak
To be close to you.

My poetry it is terrible, yet terribly heartfelt
I only wish those love tunes that graze your ears,
Were meant for me, but I know, I know….
You are longing to be closer to someone else.

I know my heart will long forever,
And I will listen to those love tunes,
Imagining they were to be sung for me,
All to be closer to you.

But as your lonely night it is endless,
My suffering is eternal,
My friends whisper beyond my ears, “she’s ruined him”
I know…I know, but still isn’t it worth it to feel closer to you?

Tonight I will sleep the sleep of the tortured,
Reaching out for you,
Wishing, hoping, praying, pleading I could feel your arms, look into your brown eyes,
Somehow transcend the emotional, numerical distances to be closer to you.

You will sleep soon, the sleep of the lonely princess,
You will dream of him, as I dream of you,
It’s laughable in my state of self righteousness; I still believe I deserve you
But its all in vain, lies of my own humanity to feel closer to you.


I live for tragedy, for drama,
Living in moments, that make me feel important,
Elaborate emotional issues, which just boils down to the “boy’s lost it”.
I know…I know…I lost my chance to be close to you.
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I Know...I Know

Contributed by Fenianheart on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 12:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I look for it everywhere,
Even though I’m not exactly sure what it is,
Something, anything, that reminds me of your presence,
So I can feel closer to you.

Though the miles they may be many,
Your feelings they may be further,
I still am willing to travel the journey of heartbreak
To be close to you.

My poetry it is terrible, yet terribly heartfelt
I only wish those love tunes that graze your ears,
Were meant for me, but I know, I know….
You are longing to be closer to someone else.

I know my heart will long forever,
And I will listen to those love tunes,
Imagining they were to be sung for me,
All to be closer to you.

But as your lonely night it is endless,
My suffering is eternal,
My friends whisper beyond my ears, “she’s ruined him”
I know…I know, but still isn’t it worth it to feel closer to you?

Tonight I will sleep the sleep of the tortured,
Reaching out for you,
Wishing, hoping, praying, pleading I could feel your arms, look into your brown eyes,
Somehow transcend the emotional, numerical distances to be closer to you.

You will sleep soon, the sleep of the lonely princess,
You will dream of him, as I dream of you,
It’s laughable in my state of self righteousness; I still believe I deserve you
But its all in vain, lies of my own humanity to feel closer to you.


I live for tragedy, for drama,
Living in moments, that make me feel important,
Elaborate emotional issues, which just boils down to the “boy’s lost it”.
I know…I know…I lost my chance to be close to you.




Copyright © Fenianheart ... [ 2003-01-25 12:20:00]
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Re: I Know...I Know (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 06:17:39 PM AEST
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well hey at least you're honest with yourself, good poem,


Re: I Know...I Know (User Rating: 1 )
by Suzy on Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 10:26:46 PM AEST
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Sigh....this is a beautiful poem and I wished that the man I love felt this way about me instead of me feeling like that over him....arrgghhh....life can be so complicated sometimes....hang in there things will change some day....


Lasca


Re: I Know...I Know (User Rating: 1 )
by roisin on Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 11:52:52 PM AEST
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great write!! ta for sharing...will look for more of your postings
rosie


Re: I Know...I Know (User Rating: 1 )
by Arwen on Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 01:32:20 AM AEST
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gee whiz man! This poem is beautiful n heartfelt :)) I didn't realise that guys felt stuff like this...just kidding :) Anywayzzzz...shot dude! u had the guts to express yourself!!! Many of the guys I know would have just discard their feelings and moved on..completely indifferent. If this lady you're in love with doesn't appreciate you...then she's definitely not worth it. We all go through this phase sometime in our lives. Just hang in there...and hope. Good luck. I look forward to reading more of your work.


Re: I Know...I Know (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 08:26:35 AM AEST
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Beautiful and heartfelt.....hope it gets better for you..
Jenni




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