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Array ( [sid] => 11201 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The cycle of hurt [time] => 2003-01-25 13:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You're nothing
I'm nothing
You're nothing
I'm nothing
I am just a little boy, frightened and alone
Picked on by the kids in school and abused in my home
I have no idea, why these people don't like me
This is where the story starts, their words cut open me
You're nothing
I'm hurt
You're nothing
I'm hurting
I am your tormentor, the doubt inside your brain
Keeper of the memories, that even now remain
I possess the knife, that stab the scars inside your mind
Always to remind you of the ones who were unkind
You're nothing
I'm nothing
You're nothing
I'm a failure
Locked alone inside a room, the razor to your wrist
Drowning in your hatred as you cry with a clenched fist
Looking for an answer, to take the pain away
Put the down the razor, wounded one, it's time to make them pay
You're nothing
I'm angry
You're nothing
I'm hurt
Lying hurt upon the ground, lying in a pit
Humiliated, covered with dirt, and other people's spit
You cry and bleed, and lick your wounds, and wonder out loud why
But they've released the beast inside, now someone has to die
You're nothing
I'm rage
You're nothing
I'm power
I'm the rage inside your mind, that wants you to destroy
16 years of anger locked inside this lonely boy
I am here to motivate, to help you hurt them all
A power mad, blood thirsty fool
who will catch me when I fall?
You're nothing
I'm strength
You're nothing
I'm what you fear
I am all your bitterness, that won't let you forget
Repeat the battles in your mind, and keep it like a pet
Revenge and retribution, until your dying day
12 more years have come and gone
Wasted hate, and getting grey
You're nothing
I'm someone
You're nothing
***** you
I'm sorry
You're nothing
I'm nothing
I'm now you.

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The cycle of hurt

Contributed by Darkscorpio on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



You're nothing
I'm nothing
You're nothing
I'm nothing
I am just a little boy, frightened and alone
Picked on by the kids in school and abused in my home
I have no idea, why these people don't like me
This is where the story starts, their words cut open me
You're nothing
I'm hurt
You're nothing
I'm hurting
I am your tormentor, the doubt inside your brain
Keeper of the memories, that even now remain
I possess the knife, that stab the scars inside your mind
Always to remind you of the ones who were unkind
You're nothing
I'm nothing
You're nothing
I'm a failure
Locked alone inside a room, the razor to your wrist
Drowning in your hatred as you cry with a clenched fist
Looking for an answer, to take the pain away
Put the down the razor, wounded one, it's time to make them pay
You're nothing
I'm angry
You're nothing
I'm hurt
Lying hurt upon the ground, lying in a pit
Humiliated, covered with dirt, and other people's spit
You cry and bleed, and lick your wounds, and wonder out loud why
But they've released the beast inside, now someone has to die
You're nothing
I'm rage
You're nothing
I'm power
I'm the rage inside your mind, that wants you to destroy
16 years of anger locked inside this lonely boy
I am here to motivate, to help you hurt them all
A power mad, blood thirsty fool
who will catch me when I fall?
You're nothing
I'm strength
You're nothing
I'm what you fear
I am all your bitterness, that won't let you forget
Repeat the battles in your mind, and keep it like a pet
Revenge and retribution, until your dying day
12 more years have come and gone
Wasted hate, and getting grey
You're nothing
I'm someone
You're nothing
***** you
I'm sorry
You're nothing
I'm nothing
I'm now you.





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Re: The cycle of hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by tier on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 02:20:59 PM AEST
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its very good and deep keep writing and ill keep reading....




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