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Array ( [sid] => 112058 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It Hurts [time] => 2005-12-24 22:41:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I sit here watching my life passing by,
The experiences and loss brings a tear to my eyes.
Some not all good like I had hoped,
I look back and wonder how I coped.
It kills me not to see his face,
I try to find him but he leaves no trace.
When I say hello, a reply would be nice,
But he just stares so quiet like mice.
I feel like I have done something wrong,
I don't want to show it I have to be strong.
He seems so shy like there's something hidden,
In his heart like I'm forbidden.
All I ask is for him to discover,
I have feelings for him, there isn't another.
I hate walking down that way,
It reminds me of when we were there everyday.
At the lockers is where we'd meet,
When I saw his face my heart skipped a beat.
I see him now but it's not the same,
There's no conversation I guess I'm to blame.
I miss being there walking down that path,
I was there with him, till he got in his car.
I'd wait for him or he'd wait for me,
That's the way it happened to be.
I felt we had something so special in hand,
Like we felt the same, now I don't understand.
What has happened over the 6 week break,
That has changed the vibe, what did it take.
From being so close then to not talking at all,
It hurts so much, it feels like he's put up a wall.
I can't break it down, it's stuck there like glue,
Will it ever come down, will I ever have you.
There's a part of me missing he once filled that space,
It hurts so much just to see his face. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 493 [topic] => 43 [informant] => BloodyTearDrops [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

It Hurts

Contributed by BloodyTearDrops on Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 10:41:35 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I sit here watching my life passing by,
The experiences and loss brings a tear to my eyes.
Some not all good like I had hoped,
I look back and wonder how I coped.
It kills me not to see his face,
I try to find him but he leaves no trace.
When I say hello, a reply would be nice,
But he just stares so quiet like mice.
I feel like I have done something wrong,
I don't want to show it I have to be strong.
He seems so shy like there's something hidden,
In his heart like I'm forbidden.
All I ask is for him to discover,
I have feelings for him, there isn't another.
I hate walking down that way,
It reminds me of when we were there everyday.
At the lockers is where we'd meet,
When I saw his face my heart skipped a beat.
I see him now but it's not the same,
There's no conversation I guess I'm to blame.
I miss being there walking down that path,
I was there with him, till he got in his car.
I'd wait for him or he'd wait for me,
That's the way it happened to be.
I felt we had something so special in hand,
Like we felt the same, now I don't understand.
What has happened over the 6 week break,
That has changed the vibe, what did it take.
From being so close then to not talking at all,
It hurts so much, it feels like he's put up a wall.
I can't break it down, it's stuck there like glue,
Will it ever come down, will I ever have you.
There's a part of me missing he once filled that space,
It hurts so much just to see his face.

Copyright © BloodyTearDrops ... [ 2005-12-24 22:41:35]
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Re: It Hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by Poetic_Influence on Sunday, 25th December 2005 @ 12:45:22 AM AEST
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i want to murder

Re: It Hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by seci on Sunday, 25th December 2005 @ 02:11:04 PM AEST
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i love the poem. really. but you aren't thinking about killin' anyone are you?

Re: It Hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by twinkey on Sunday, 25th December 2005 @ 03:00:46 PM AEST
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wow.. that is one of the most amazing poems i have ever read ugh i hate it when things like this happend.. trust me i have been there to your not alone in all this stupid guy ***** and yes it hurts and all but you will find someone it might not be him but hey, you might have to settle with something a little less ... but hey GREAT! poem and ill be looking out for more awsome job! > Sam

Re: It Hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by solosoul on Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 11:06:36 AM AEST
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nice write and i can say i think everyone has had this experience only i was the one that put up the wall .... sometimes a break triggers things like that and its not you perhaps but sometimes you think about things while you have some time and your not really sure if that is what you need or what not .... so you do things like that not nessasarly on purpose but it always ended up back the way it was or atleast back to normal but sometimes there is a gap created to big to close .... so you dont have to just sit back and watch that happen you know god gave you a mouth US IT!!!!!
sometimes that might be what we needed .....

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