Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	09-June 21:39:52 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 112197 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Our Final Goodbye [time] => 2005-12-28 06:15:38 [hometext] => Sometimes you just get to the point where u just cannot hold on anymore [bodytext] => Promise me one thing
That you will not cry
As tomorrow fades to darkness
As I say my final goodbye

Cherish these memories
That you and I have shared
Always remember these dieing words
And never forget just how much I cared

I wish things could be different
But im afraid they cannot
I trusted u with my life
But I see that u gave up

I cannot handle
This heart to break again
The pain was just too real
Its something I couldn't relive

So see these as the last words
That will ever come from me
But keep them in your heart
And just one-day maybe u will see

See just how much pain
And how much pressure, it is just to bare
See how many times your heart can break
And where it begins to tare

It’s just, things aint getting easier
They’re only getting worse
I have to let go
I have to end this verse

So when ever you are feeling lonely
When ever you get scared
Just look up to the stars
And once again our hearts will pair

So don't take this hard
Just please remember this line
There always has to be an ending
To everyones final goodbye......

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 255 [topic] => 36 [informant] => cooley1818 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Our Final Goodbye

Contributed by cooley1818 on Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 06:15:38 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Promise me one thing
That you will not cry
As tomorrow fades to darkness
As I say my final goodbye

Cherish these memories
That you and I have shared
Always remember these dieing words
And never forget just how much I cared

I wish things could be different
But im afraid they cannot
I trusted u with my life
But I see that u gave up

I cannot handle
This heart to break again
The pain was just too real
Its something I couldn't relive

So see these as the last words
That will ever come from me
But keep them in your heart
And just one-day maybe u will see

See just how much pain
And how much pressure, it is just to bare
See how many times your heart can break
And where it begins to tare

It’s just, things aint getting easier
They’re only getting worse
I have to let go
I have to end this verse

So when ever you are feeling lonely
When ever you get scared
Just look up to the stars
And once again our hearts will pair

So don't take this hard
Just please remember this line
There always has to be an ending
To everyones final goodbye......

Copyright Â© cooley1818 ... [ 2005-12-28 06:15:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Our Final Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 09:59:11 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I like the thoughts behind this and the content, however a bit of work needed to smooth out the flow in some of the lines.
Keep up the emotional aspect of your writing, it shines through well!

Re: Our Final Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Jazzy on Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 02:22:47 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I absolutely love this poem ... I can relate to it so deeply and I appreciate your talent ..KEEP IT UP...

Re: Our Final Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Poetic_Influence on Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 03:57:43 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

GJ

Re: Our Final Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 05:07:24 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

very nice write
r.m.wilder

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. Â©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright Â© to their submitter. All the rest Copyright Â© 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com