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Inside
Contributed by
Silverwings
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Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 10:00:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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Inside of me, theres something else
Than what you see through eyes perceive.
Looks are illusionary, nothing more;
Fools are what they intend to deceive...
Beauty is within yourself
In each and every one of you.
And yet we judge as if were none
With what our eyes allow to view.
But behind my face and through my eyes
Dwells the beauty you can confide.
Embraced with Love and bound with Hope;
The rarest treasure I bear inside.
If you want to feel that wonder
Look beyond what is bleak.
Soon in time youll realize that
The answer lies in what you seek.
Copyright ©
Silverwings
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2002-07-25 22:00:37]
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Re: Inside
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by Terry_Stephen_Driscoll on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 11:25:13 PM AEST
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Yes indeed - message loud and clear. Nicely written - perfect length and structure - with something to say.
Excellent.
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Re: Inside
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by Kassidi on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 04:06:28 AM AEST
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A wonderful poem. It's message was so strong. You should be proud of this poem.
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Re: Inside
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by markymark on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 04:09:29 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed reading this, everyone has there goodness inside, the trick is letting it out...great write...Mark ... |
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Re: Inside
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by chatabox on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 05:55:50 AM AEST
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I love the way you express yourself in this poem.....we will indeed look beyond and see how wonderfully unique and beautiful you are.
I just loved this. |
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Re: Inside
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by Izza on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 09:17:53 PM AEST
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| "Fools are what they intend to deceive"...nicely written poem.. |
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Re: Inside
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by Chrissie on
Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 10:02:11 PM AEST
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I just love this...I echo all that has been said..you write beautifully..
Chrissie |
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