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your words
Contributed by
emokid
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Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 03:05:26 AM in AEST
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I hope you choke on your words I look in your hollow eyes you are dead inside all you ever fed me was lies you never loved me so don't you open your mouth I know what you are gonna say
love is a word wasted on you an emotion wasted on someone that never cared anything about me so just turn away before i do something i regret because i already regret you what the *&%# was i thinking
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Re: your words
(User Rating: 1 ) by emokid on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 03:09:41 AM AEST (User
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its strange when i sit to write i dont put anything in stanzas but just a separate but connected thought if that makes sense |
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Re: your words
(User Rating: 1 ) by SocialMisfit on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 03:16:40 AM AEST (User
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stanza's r important sometimes, but you can pull it off not haveing them, this was good and full of emotion.
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Re: your words
(User Rating: 1 ) by Drmbeliever on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 03:17:17 AM AEST (User
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its always about hurt and pain.......if there wasnt pain then its like you dont feel....and when there is, you wish your couldnt feel. |
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