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Array ( [sid] => 112561 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => sleep [time] => 2006-01-04 16:56:01 [hometext] => I'v been gone for a while but i have some stuff i wanna post and here is one of them i hope someone enjoys [bodytext] => let me sleep
the day is too bright
and the morning too nice
it'l ruin my mood

just let me sleep
my limbs hurt
my heart aches
and the floor is too hard
leave me wrapped in sheets
the gateway to my perfect world

is it raining....
good sleeping weather
the world weeps
but it pales in comparison
my heart melted in a puddle and dried
and formed a cloud that follows me

why would i leave my utopia
to see the sun outside...
it hurts my eye's and the cloud
just rains on me more in contempt

just let me sleep

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 75 [informant] => idiotbox [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

sleep

Contributed by idiotbox on Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 04:56:01 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

let me sleep
the day is too bright
and the morning too nice
it'l ruin my mood

just let me sleep
my limbs hurt
my heart aches
and the floor is too hard
leave me wrapped in sheets
the gateway to my perfect world

is it raining....
good sleeping weather
the world weeps
but it pales in comparison
my heart melted in a puddle and dried
and formed a cloud that follows me

why would i leave my utopia
to see the sun outside...
it hurts my eye's and the cloud
just rains on me more in contempt

just let me sleep

Copyright © idiotbox ... [ 2006-01-04 16:56:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by dc on Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 05:02:31 PM AEST
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Nice write
Sweet dreams
Sleep tight

Re: sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 06:27:49 PM AEST
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Well, I'd never be one to argue against sleeping!

I like this. There is a subdued power to it, since you've let the situation and surroundings portray what goes on inside, rather than spelling it out. Nicely done.

Andrew

Re: sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 07:39:50 PM AEST
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great write with a cool flow and a great thought involved
r.m.wilder

Re: sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by MrJeans on Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 02:27:24 AM AEST
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Very nice expression
in this good poem
I enjoyed this!
Interesting thoughts.
Keep it up!

Mr.

Re: sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 07:21:43 AM AEST
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Very well write, although I don't agree on evrything, I think that ecspecially when you are feeling down, that is when you need to get out, see the bright world so that your mood can lift!
Thanx 4 sharing :)

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