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Array ( [sid] => 112582 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Mists Are Rolling In [time] => 2006-01-04 22:00:26 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The mists are rolling in
silently over the waters,
it's come to steal the sight
of all our sons and daughters.

The mists are rolling in
to hide our shallow bay,
and the stars that light our path
can no longer lead the way.

The mists are rolling in
it's thicker than ever before,
and it's enveloping our cries within
it's voluminous folds forevermore. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 43 [informant] => walks_in_clouds [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

The Mists Are Rolling In

Contributed by walks_in_clouds on Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 10:00:26 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

The mists are rolling in
silently over the waters,
it's come to steal the sight
of all our sons and daughters.

The mists are rolling in
to hide our shallow bay,
and the stars that light our path
can no longer lead the way.

The mists are rolling in
it's thicker than ever before,
and it's enveloping our cries within
it's voluminous folds forevermore.

Copyright © walks_in_clouds ... [ 2006-01-04 22:00:26]
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Re: The Mists Are Rolling In (User Rating: 1 )
by frankcube on Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 09:05:01 AM AEST
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Quite a creative piece you have written. I enjoying the subtlety of it, definitely.

Please consider my poems too, if you have time. =]

Re: The Mists Are Rolling In (User Rating: 1 )
by enigma on Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 02:35:46 PM AEST
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...it flows quite naturally...I like the feel of the words, enveloping and voluminous...it certainly has a soulful spirit...light and darkness...muffled cries...lost...hidden...stolen...a sense of quiet despair...

...a thought I've been considering recently...in genesis, at the end of each day God said it was good...and then a whole theocracy is born to try and declare His creation bad...have we somehow lost the way...are the primordial stars of our universal development no longer able to lead us...are we blind...faithless...smothered in the voluminous folds...

...your expression has just enough and not too much...very nice...

ron...enigma

Re: The Mists Are Rolling In (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 08:52:35 PM AEST
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like a thief that comes to rob your soul in the night.. wow, nice poem.. I love it.. a lot will be screaming, that type of fog is a killer.. RL

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