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Array ( [sid] => 112672 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => WINDOW.............................. [time] => 2006-01-06 14:51:48 [hometext] => HERE GOES ANOTHER ONE OF MY POEMS!! I HOPE YOU ENJOY IT... FEEL FREE TO COMMENT ME!!!!^_^ THIS PROBABLY DOESNT MAKE ANY SENSE .. [bodytext] => looking out my window this afternoon as I was tiptoeing near the crow . As I was doing so I hurt my toe.

The crow was yellow I thought to myself NO- NO - NO this cant be cause crows are not
yellow they are black.

Then I went to say Hello to the crow trying to catch it and making myself thinking I am a Hero.

Then the airflow was so cold .

The crow just looked at me as it was eating jello .

I had a photo of this sparrow and it was so slow in the snow.

SO SO SO I swallow my pride and went insided and ate some tacos

Then me and my sparrow did the tango my sparrow's name was pluto.

I heard echo all threw the house when it all finally got quiet .

Then I went and hurt my elbow after the crow flew in my home.

Then I said again No No NO , you have got to go but as i was trying to catch the crow it almost fell in my stove.

And so so so I SAVED IT AND THEN I SURE DID FEEL LIKE A HERO!

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WINDOW..............................

Contributed by butterflygirl40 on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 02:51:48 PM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

looking out my window this afternoon as I was tiptoeing near the crow . As I was doing so I hurt my toe.

The crow was yellow I thought to myself NO- NO - NO this cant be cause crows are not
yellow they are black.

Then I went to say Hello to the crow trying to catch it and making myself thinking I am a Hero.

Then the airflow was so cold .

The crow just looked at me as it was eating jello .

I had a photo of this sparrow and it was so slow in the snow.

SO SO SO I swallow my pride and went insided and ate some tacos

Then me and my sparrow did the tango my sparrow's name was pluto.

I heard echo all threw the house when it all finally got quiet .

Then I went and hurt my elbow after the crow flew in my home.

Then I said again No No NO , you have got to go but as i was trying to catch the crow it almost fell in my stove.

And so so so I SAVED IT AND THEN I SURE DID FEEL LIKE A HERO!

Copyright © butterflygirl40 ... [ 2006-01-06 14:51:48]
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Re: WINDOW.............................. (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 03:00:54 PM AEST
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very intersting write. Your images I could see in my minds eyes. Nicely done

Michelle

Re: WINDOW.............................. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 03:04:11 PM AEST
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once again you manage 2 strike a noteable

chord in my poetic region of appreciation,

love the humor amidst the simplicity, nice

useage of certain words . . .

Ben

Re: WINDOW.............................. (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 03:34:34 PM AEST
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BRAVO!BRAVO!BRAVO! WHAT A WONDERFUL POEM.
How very creative you are little Butterfly girl.......and I can't remember when I've enjoyed a poem so much as this!!! Just off the top of your head, filled with fun, joy, excitement, and how I loved it from the first line to the last.
You are very talented indeed! Did you know most people can't even come close to thinking like that!!!!
Never allow anyone, not even age take that part away from you........grasp it, embrace it, and never let it go!!!!
Warm love

Lovingcritters
ConSue

Re: WINDOW.............................. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 02:09:11 AM AEST
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Another cute write!!!! I love your sense of humor. It also kinda made me hungry for tacos!! ;-) And reminded me of this time a stray cat came waltzing into my house.

Nice. :-)

Tim

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