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Array ( [sid] => 112743 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => a marriage in lost [time] => 2006-01-07 18:52:57 [hometext] => for a friend of mine [bodytext] => she new it from the start that this marriage was a farce
right before she said i do she new her life was pretty much threw
but her father a preacher and a little bundle on the way
she couldnt ruin what her father protrayed
now she runs to another mans arms while the husband sits at home watching the farm
she is looking for love in all the wrong spots
she wants to be noticed she wants to feel hot
but in my eyes she is a beautful woman
she just needs the attention she isnt given
a useless man not filling her needs
she only wants to be pleased
with all i can i wish her the best
she would make any man happy with out lifes test
gerdy my love i hope things work out
if it was up to me i would love you no doubt [comments] => 3 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 22 [informant] => lostrelic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

a marriage in lost

Contributed by lostrelic on Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 06:52:57 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

she new it from the start that this marriage was a farce
right before she said i do she new her life was pretty much threw
but her father a preacher and a little bundle on the way
she couldnt ruin what her father protrayed
now she runs to another mans arms while the husband sits at home watching the farm
she is looking for love in all the wrong spots
she wants to be noticed she wants to feel hot
but in my eyes she is a beautful woman
she just needs the attention she isnt given
a useless man not filling her needs
she only wants to be pleased
with all i can i wish her the best
she would make any man happy with out lifes test
gerdy my love i hope things work out
if it was up to me i would love you no doubt

Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2006-01-07 18:52:57]
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Re: a marriage in lost (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 04:39:06 PM AEST
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I hope your friend listened to you loud and clear. She is looking for the wrong kind of love, and I assume she is now a parent, it's not just her life now, but her childs also. This was a gift of love for you to pen this for her, and your words were not only well said, but truthful too. Good for you!
Warm love
consue

Re: a marriage in lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 05:24:51 PM AEST
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very intense and powerful! good job!

Re: a marriage in lost (User Rating: 1 )
by trialnerror on Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 01:10:21 AM AEST
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man , u deserve better than her. if this poem is true then she doesnt deserve a person as good as u dude. very deep and heart felt, good job

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