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Array ( [sid] => 112783 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => UGLY. [time] => 2006-01-08 14:36:57 [hometext] => Here is another one of my poems!!! Feel free to comment, [bodytext] => I feel so achy inside because I have so much ache and no one agrees with me.

I get angry because there isn't any medicine to work for my ache .

MY eyes look all baggy, because I don't feel like no beauty.

I feel like I am so beefy because I eat to much candy .

I wished I lived in a big city .

I wished I didn't have such a sorry daddy.

I am always so fussy and grumpy .

I hate the grocery stores and I am always so jumpy and I feel so lazy and lonely.

I don't like the wintry nights they are too cold.

I love to eat taffy candy and drink ice cold tea ..

But even after all of this I still feel ugly and trashy.

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UGLY.

Contributed by butterflygirl40 on Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 02:36:57 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I feel so achy inside because I have so much ache and no one agrees with me.

I get angry because there isn't any medicine to work for my ache .

MY eyes look all baggy, because I don't feel like no beauty.

I feel like I am so beefy because I eat to much candy .

I wished I lived in a big city .

I wished I didn't have such a sorry daddy.

I am always so fussy and grumpy .

I hate the grocery stores and I am always so jumpy and I feel so lazy and lonely.

I don't like the wintry nights they are too cold.

I love to eat taffy candy and drink ice cold tea ..

But even after all of this I still feel ugly and trashy.

Copyright Â© butterflygirl40 ... [ 2006-01-08 14:36:57]
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Re: UGLY. (User Rating: 1 )
by dc on Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 02:47:49 PM AEST
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Hey , that was kinda neat!

Re: UGLY. (User Rating: 1 )
by the_pied_piper on Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 03:42:53 PM AEST
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kinda unclear but cool none the less ... def something that i can relate to

Re: UGLY. (User Rating: 1 )
by PoetBaby814 on Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 04:42:19 PM AEST
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no offense but that was bad its makes no sense ur just rambeling on an on.

Re: UGLY. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 12:38:07 AM AEST
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This is different I liked it

LG

Re: UGLY. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 10:39:18 AM AEST
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u say what u feel and u put it in2 words and it sounds very sincere 2 me and very honest and while there r a lot of ugly things in the world i doubt your one of them nice write . . .

Ben

Re: UGLY. (User Rating: 1 )
by priss on Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 07:46:19 PM AEST
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i like this poem and your unique writing style.

Re: UGLY. (User Rating: 1 )
by PoetBaby814 on Tuesday, 18th September 2007 @ 08:59:24 AM AEST
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im sorry if u felt my previous comment was mean i was trying to give feedback i think it was awhile ago but it was mean and it could have been more constructive so i apologize.

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