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Array ( [sid] => 112851 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Always South of Eden [time] => 2006-01-09 17:10:34 [hometext] => This is about Ellis Ruley. a black primative painter who lived in the white suberbs of CT, and who's work got noted after his suspicius death [bodytext] => Paint me a picture - Of Life through your eyes
Where everyone’s happy - And nobody cries
Make me a painting – A view from your soul
Make the world be fair and people be whole
Paint me a picture and send it to me
To who it may concerned – Where ever they may be
Living always South of Eden – Yea we’re living always just South of Eden

I know it’s out there –cause my momma told me so
It’s written in the Bible and that make it true
Some times when I’m sleeping it’s there beside me
You know I can catch a glimpse – But I just can’t get a view

Paint me the person – that I know I can be
Use the colors of strength and the shadings of free
Make me a hero – with the stroke of your brush
All of the girls so pretty – in the forest so lush
Paint me a picture – and send it to me
To who ever it concerns – where ever they may be
Living always South of Eden
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Always South of Eden

Contributed by dc on Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 05:10:34 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Paint me a picture - Of Life through your eyes
Where everyone’s happy - And nobody cries
Make me a painting – A view from your soul
Make the world be fair and people be whole
Paint me a picture and send it to me
To who it may concerned – Where ever they may be
Living always South of Eden – Yea we’re living always just South of Eden

I know it’s out there –cause my momma told me so
It’s written in the Bible and that make it true
Some times when I’m sleeping it’s there beside me
You know I can catch a glimpse – But I just can’t get a view

Paint me the person – that I know I can be
Use the colors of strength and the shadings of free
Make me a hero – with the stroke of your brush
All of the girls so pretty – in the forest so lush
Paint me a picture – and send it to me
To who ever it concerns – where ever they may be
Living always South of Eden

Copyright Â© dc ... [ 2006-01-09 17:10:34]
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Re: Always South of Eden (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 07:10:34 PM AEST
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Don't think this is the Eden I know of, is south of eden Hell? anyway, nice write, loved it, thank you for letting me know of it. Raquel Leah

Re: Always South of Eden (User Rating: 1 )
by Nos on Saturday, 3rd March 2007 @ 03:07:54 PM AEST
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I like. Keep em coming.

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